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Rating
15+
Chapters
9
Words
24,972
Characters
Dumbledore, Lupin, Sirius, James, Lily, Pettigrew
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Remus/OC
Genre(s)
Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
38
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2005-10-12 6:23am
Last Chapter
2006-05-01 12:20am
Last Updated
2006-05-01 12:20am

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1 Chapter 21- Where our loyalties lie

Hi everyone! I am sooo sorry about James Potter and the first defiance!!! I haven't been allowed to post on that story for sooo long! I'm really worried all of you have stopped reading :-( Well this is that story continued because it wouldn't let me post. For everyone else who hasn't a clue what I'm on about go and read the first half of this story: James Potter and the first Defiance before you read this. Please stay with me you guys mean so much 2 me!

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2 Chapter 22- Hiding from the Truth

Ok guys I hope you are all still reading! Again this chapter is 22 (not 2) so read James Potter and the first defiance first which has the first 20 chapters of this story before you read this. I know this is all really confusing but I hope you keep reading I need you all!

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3 Chapter 23- Closer to the Flame

Ok thank you all so much if you're reading this because i know the swap from the origional story to this was a bit of an anoyance so please bear with me :-) I hope you all understand by now that the first 20 chapters of this story are published under James Potter and the first defiance because of a technical fault. Thanks again guys

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4 Chapter 24- Things aren't always what they seem

Those who can face evil and not be overcome by it are the ones with true power. Those who allow it to engulf them are weak minded and will never survive.

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5 Chapter 25- Explanation and Seduction

Ok I sort of forced this chapter. It’s needed to explain a lot of things but it’s not terribly exciting. I felt like James and Lily needed to move along a bit in their relationship and I decided to put it in here because I didn’t know where else it would fit. I’m still not happy with it but I can’t fathom re writing it so I’ve left it. It sets the next chapter up nicely so bare with me and read on

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6 Chapter 26- Dates and Duos

At last the new chapter is here. I am so sorry I have taken so long I hope this makes up for it.

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7 Chapter 27- Cold Hard Realisation

Find out what happened to Lily, how far Remus is willing to go for Sarah and how James is coping through it all. (If you havn't a clue what I mean please read James Potter and the First Defiance then part 2).

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8 Chapter 28 -Christmas confessions

“Lily what’s wrong?” he asked tilting her chin to look at him. Her face crumpled as his brave eyes stared into her own. “James I’m…I’m still scared. I can still remember it…I felt so cold…I wanted blood…” she sobbed as James stroked her hair. She turned her head and looked straight at him. “I’m so scared because…because I still want blood James, it’s like I can smell it…its everywhere and it scares me that I could be one of them.” For all Sarah haters here is a good chapter lol. Please read!!!

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9 And so it begins

“Professor Dumbledore wanted me to give this to you. He said something about announcing it tonight.” The boy held out an envelope sealed with a wax crest. Lily took it and thanked the boy before he ran away. Leaving her bags she entered the library and sat down curiously. She slid her finger under the seal and it broke open. With an unusual anticipation she slid the cream parchment out and read with hungry eyes. By the end her jaw had dropped and her hand was gripping the table anxiously. Tonight’s meeting was getting more and more interesting...

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