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Rating
15+
Chapters
2
Words
1,946
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, James, Lily, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Sirius/Lily, James/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language
Story Reviews
3
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2006-09-03 2:05am
Last Chapter
2006-09-23 9:48am
Last Updated
2006-09-23 9:48am

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1 [lOsing tHe bAttle].

Excerpt---- “I was just kidding, James. Of course, we’re too old for that,” She said when James came up to her. When she looked up at him, he smiled to her. She hoped he would read her eyes like he did in second year and know what she was feeling. But not anymore, he was too blinded by Lily. Too blinded to even care about his best friend. Ali’s prince had died. She had lost the battle.

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2 [tAlK wiTh rEmuS].

“Why couldn’t it just be you or Sirius? Why does it have to be James? Why not other guys?” she started asking while tears flow freely in her cheeks. Remus brushed them away, but they continued to flow down. He hugged her while she sobs at his chest. Right now, she’d rather have anyone yelled ‘Crucio’ at her than feel the pain she’s feeling. She’d rather be cut by shattered glass, in hope to pull it back together than to put back the pieces of her broken heart. She’d rather feel the worst physical pain than to feel this emotional one.

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