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| Ch. # | Chapter Title | Word Count | Reviews |
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Chapter 1 - The Journey I can’t believe that this is going to be the last train ride to Hogwarts, looking back now it seems like only last week I was walking around Diagon Alley with Mum and Dad, not having a clue what I was doing. |
1,924 | 20 |
| 2 |
Chapter 2- The Arrival “Lily,” whispered Pamela “Lily, get up!” I looked at her as she tugged the sleeve of my arm. I looked around and saw people looking at me, oh no! I’d missed my cue. |
1,350 | 7 |
| 3 |
Chapter 3 - The Sick Bucket “Cheer up James! Lily’s just come in, and she’s, err, she’s smiling.” Remus was looking at the great hall entrance, with a sort of I-can’t-believe-my-eyes look on his face. I turned and followed his gaze and sure enough, Lily was smiling. I looked again, but realized she was smiling at Remus. |
1,411 | 6 |
| 4 |
Chapter 4 - The Warning “Merlin Lily, you’re going to break James’ heart.” Pamela said, but with a small smile. “I warned him, he brought it on himself,” Jessica and Pamela giggled and I joined in. |
1,133 | 13 |
| 5 |
Chapte 5 - The Meeting “Ta daa!” I had cut out a mask from a spare piece of parchment and was holding it in front of my eyes. The room fell silent, either in a pleasant shock or wondering what on earth my creation was supposed to be. |
1,099 | 7 |
| 6 |
Chapter 6 - The question Merlin, what was that? Never and I mean never have I got so embarrassed around James. I took in a deep breath, I do not have a crush on James |
2,354 | 20 |
| 7 |
Chapter 7 - the first full moon And then I saw. Glued to the spot in front of Moony was Lily Evans. She must have followed me here! I ran in an attempt to get Lily away from Moony, but it was too late. |
1,642 | 13 |
| 8 |
Chapter 8 - The truth “Oh good Miss Evans, your awake” said Madam Pomfrey walking towards me “how’s your arm?” she asked looking down at my arm, I wince |
1,177 | 9 |
| 9 |
Chapter 9 - The Biscuits “Fine!” I replied. If Sirius wants a fight, he’s got a fight. |
1,120 | 8 |
| 10 |
Chapter 10 - The first kiss I walked out of the common room, making my way over to the hospital wing, James had just asked me out again and I know this is like the 30th time this year or something stupid, but this time I actually considered it for a moment. |
1,475 | 15 |
| 11 |
Chapter 11 - The Fight “Shut your mouth, Potter.” Ouch. Well, he’s now my ex-best mate. |
1,326 | 15 |
| 12 |
Chapter 12 - The Second Kiss... I gave a tiny smile. He smiled slightly back as if he was relieved that I didn’t shout at him. I stared at him, I wish he would just kiss me again, WAIT, no I don’t, I don’t, I don’t, I don’t!! |
1,373 | 10 |
| 13 |
Chapter 13 - The Detention “You can tell me.” I whispered into her ear. |
1,419 | 10 |
| 14 |
Chapter 14 - The awkward questions “Look James if you have come in here to ask me what I think ‘we’ are again then you are wasting your breath because I don’t know, okay. What happened was – I don’t know what it was but what I do know is that it’s confused the hell out of me and I don’t know what I think anymore.” |
1,203 | 9 |
| 15 |
Chapter 15 - The Hogsmead Trip “Lello Hily!” I called as a beautiful redhead entered the bar. |
1,388 | 10 |
| 16 |
Chapter 16 - The Interuptions “So” started James “are you going to come to the ball, what if I promise to look after you?” he smirked at me |
1,297 | 12 |
| 17 |
Chapter 17- The Killer Hairbrush “James Potter! Where are you? Get up!” Lily Evans was in the doorway of my bedroom, looking especially menacing with her weapon of destruction, i.e. her hairbrush. |
1,248 | 12 |
| 18 |
Chapter 18 - The Dicision “Have fun James,” I said turning and closing the door, I heard him walk over to his bathroom and then after a minute he walked out. I sat on the edge of my bed, my dress catching my eye. I looked over at it. It really was beautiful, |
1,718 | 18 |
| 19 |
Chapter19 - The Ball I saw her, and I stopped breathing. The most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen was standing by the refreshment table. Stuff Callie. I need to meet this girl. |
1,094 | 4 |
| 20 |
Chapter 20 - The Hairgrip I thought for a minute, then reached to the back if my head and slid out my small hairgrip. It was black with a small emerald teardrop on it. |
1,891 | 10 |
| 21 |
Chapter 21 - The end “It wasn’t like that.” My heart was beating fast. I didn’t expect this reaction. I just – I just don’t know. I knew she wouldn’t be that delighted when she found out, but I thought, or at least hoped she would be just a little bit happy. |
1,352 | 34 |
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