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Rating
Mature
Chapters
44
Words
173,636
Characters
Harry, Cho
Primary Relationship
Harry/Cho
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance, Angst
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Mild Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
36
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-03-17 12:09am
Last Chapter
2009-04-02 10:56pm
Last Updated
2009-04-02 10:56pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Chapter 1: Last night on Private Drive

Harry is at the Dursley's, but circumstances have changed.

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2 Chapter 2: Remus Lupin Returns

 Harry's former Dark Arts Teacher returns to take hime to the funeral

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3 Chapter 3: The Funeral of Sirius Black

Harry puts his godfather Sirius Black to rest, and makes plans to visit the Burrow. He is also aggravated when he finds out that a certian person will not be attending the funeral.

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4 Chapter 4: The Burrow

Harry arrives at the burrow to catch up on current events. Ron has a new admirer.

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5 Chapter 5: The reflecting of Cho Chang

  Cho Chang reflects on her last few years at School, and at home,,   on the boy she loves and on the situation that is tearing at her heart,

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6 Chapter 6:The Muggle Hospital

     Cho learns of the progression of her mother's condition, and reflects more on her past.

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7 Chapter 7: Squib in the Family

   Cho spends some timme with her English cousins, and recieves some important O.W.L.'s

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8 Chapter 8: The Harry Potter

  Harry Potter finds his fame has returned.

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9 Misinterpretation

 Cho takes her Muggle cousins to Diagon Alley to get her school supplies, and runs into a school mate, later she sees Harry with Hermione, and we see an event through Cho's eyes.

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10 Chapter 10: Maritta’s gang

  The Hogwarts Students reunight at planform nine and three quarters.

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11 Chapter 11: The Thirty Consequences of a Bad Intention

Harry is out to confront Draco, but gets in trouble with Ernie Mac Millian

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12 Chapter 12: Addressing the students.

Dumbledore addresses the students

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13 Chapter 13: Summer Visitors

   Harry learns of some strang goings on at Hogwarts over the summer, and meets the new Huffelpuff quidditch captian.

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14 Chapter 14: Getting Luna’s back.

      Cho tries to get everyone to support Luna's belief that she has a Crumple Horned Snorack at Hogwarts, and then Cho confronts Hermione about something. Later she learns that the room arangements have been changed. It's a  very Ravenclaw chapter.

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15 Chapter 15: Things You Learn Hiding Under A Common Room Table.

Authors note: As I have run out of what little I have that could be considered talent. The next chapter will be from Marietta’s point of view. I had hoped to keep it from only Cho’s and Harry’s perspective, but I’m really not that good. Still, I’ll try to keep it interesting.

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16 Chapter 16: The Secret Love of Marietta Edgencombe

    Marrietta begins planning for her dark endevor, and we find that she has a new ally to help her in her cause.

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17 Chapter 17: The Hate of the Gryffindors

Harry learns that some people in his own house don't really care for Mugglebornes, and he finds a familer sad girl in the library. Someone please comment. You loved it, you hated it, you were indifferent to it. Please let me know.

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18 Chapter 18: Fear of a Commitment

Here it is! Finally! The chapter where Harry and Cho really get to talk. My head was about to explode. But we see that at least for now that Harry and Cho have different ideas about what each other wants. And Hermione and Ron also have some conflict of interest that will need to be ironed out. I hope everyone likes, but I’m keeping my fingers crossed on this one.

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19 Chapter 19: The Not so Daring Adventures of Cho and Luna.

   Cho and Luna attempt to follow Marietta to find out what she is up to.

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20 Chapter 20: Final Preparations

Well now Marietta has her final preparations underway in this chapter, I hope everyone likes it, I’m losing my mind doing this… and I didn’t have much to lose. But I hope I didn’t leave any plot holes. Take care, and enjoy.

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21 Chapter 21: Fridays Breakfast.

Um… well this isn’t the greatest chapter, but I think that Friday will be a few chapters. I know it will not be anyone’s favorite, perhaps its more filler.Take care all.

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22 Chapter 22: Care of Magical Creatures.

 Cho's first class with Harry

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23 Chapter 23: Crumple Horned Snorack

Well hear I am at Chapter 23! God when will it end. I’m completely mental now. Mad as a hatter. “Wobble!” I’m sorry to drag this day out, but I need to put more filler in. I think I’ll call the chapter after this day ends “The Crunch” as in, I Gotta crunch this story down and be done with it. Well, Hermione lets her jealousy still her cool and Cho sticks up for someone when almost no one else will, that’s cannon! Hagrid brings out another creature that you really wouldn’t want to meet in a dark alley, and Marietta does what she does best. P

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24 Chapter 24: Missing Time

Okay… I feel I should explain something about Marietta’s constant nudity, or actually the shape shifters nudity. It can assume any organic form, but not like the clothing. So when it arrives as Miss Norris, who isn’t wearing any clothes, it is essentially nude. If it wore a flea collar as Miss Norris, and changed to Harry, it would strangle itself to death as it’s neck became to large to the collar, unless it was able to lose it between forms, as a blob. Sorry! Anyway, to put it short, creature must be nude, because it cannot assume clothing while mimicking someone.

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25 Chapter 25: Dinner in the Common Room

  Did... did anyone wanna comment on the story so far? You know something small so I'll know how it hits people? You know... you loved it, you hated it, you were indifferent. Anybody?

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26 Chapter 26: Screams from the Gryffindor Tower.

Sigh Okay… where was I? Um, well this chapter sounds a little dirty, but I’ve tried to be as discreet as possible. More of Hermione not speaking to Ron, and well… other stuff. A surprise awaits next chapter at Hagrid’s hut, and I’ll see everyone then.

Thanks again to all of you for reading, I'll try to finish this off as soon as possible,

Highice007

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27 Chapter 27: Les Bastille

Okayyyyyy, well another chapter, and still in the first week of there school:( Somebody shoot me in the head. I have no talent. Anyway here we finally get to see what Hagrid and Dumbledore have been up to all summer, and why Dumbledore hasn’t been at Hogwarts all summer.

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28 28: Sharing Intelligence

Hello everyone, back again, with another chapter. Um… well Here everyone is taking their collective intelligence, and putting the pieces together. Not a lot of action here, but some attraction, and I’ll let you decide how good it is. Enjoy, and thanks for the reviews.

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29 Chapter 29: Aggressive Quidditch

Okay everyone who’s come back… um well this is the longest chapter ever, and I’m sorry, but there is a Quidditch match, and I wasn’t sure how to describe it. I think I was shooting for not to much detail, and not to little. I think I missed the mark. Well as I said it’s long. Harry sees the entire match play in his head, and he sees everything that everyone was telling him about. I tried really hard to not leave any plot holes, and to mention everything. 

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30 Chapter 30: Marietta’s Plan for Cho

   Please review,  You loved it, you hated it, you were indiffrent to it. Please review,  Please.

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31 Chapter 31: Ambush!

Hello again everyone. Well this chapter was very disturbing to write. It really made me sick to write all that stuff, especially since all the physical features that Cho possess are ones that I like the most. Example: Almond Shaped eyes, button nose, olive completed skin. I had to put myself in a racist mind, and it’s nowhere I want to be yuck! Anyway… this is a really disturbing chapter, be warned.

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32 Chapter 32: Dueling Class.

Back again everyone, well this chapter is mostly to show two things.

Harry is not a wuss when it comes to dueling. It’s just that Marietta was always able to catch him by surprise. But when Harry’s ready, no ones getting the edge on him.

That Harry Blames Draco for what happened at the Quidditch game, as Draco’s family has money, and connections, and a motive to go after him.

The rest is filler, and well, there is a lot of dialog in it. So I hope it keeps everyone interested.

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33 Chapter 33: Filch's Living Quarters

Marietta meets Lori on the Astronomy Tower, and her love in her Uncles Living Quarters/Office

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34 Chapter 34: The Jinxing Torso


Author's Chapter Notes:
 

Well here is chapter 34. Chapter 34! What am I doing? Sorry... I just snapped. Well here goes some action stuff, and sad stuff, and the Harry not taking the advice from Hamlet stuff.

"This above all, to thine own self be true." The Queen. I hope everyone likes it. Fingers crossed for luck.;)

 

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35 Chapter 35: The Third Bewitched Room.

Okay, back again everyone. I’d like to thank everyone for posting your comments. You all inspire me not to quit until I finish the story.

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36 Chapter 36: Cho’s promise

Well in this one we find out why Cho hasn’t told Harry what’s been going on, and Dumbledore makes a guest appearance. (Yea!) Also a person shows up that really makes one of the characters very pissed off. Um I have a great love of Helicopters, but cant describe them to well in print, so if you wanted a better idea of what is being seen by the characters, look up (Bell Jet Ranger III) under a Google image search, or rent the movie “Blue Thunder” and look at the basic police chopper to see what it looks like.

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37 Chapter 37: The Yule Ball Committee.

Ooookay everyone, well here it is. Chapter 37. god, I’m sorry about the length. Um well this is more about misinterpretations. It also solves the problem about how I was going to get Harry to argue with a pureblood, and how Marietta could find out about it. Well, I have to say that this seems like a throwaway chapter, but it really has some significance to it.

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38 Chapter 38: Running Interference

Okay everyone, well um thanks to all of you who posted. This chapter has Cho worrying about her friends. Marietta plotting about Potter and Cho’s friend’s fate and more taking the place of people by the shape shifter. The title is sort of what Cho does in the chapter for her friend, but… err well here’s the chapter anyway. It was supposed to be exciting, but I ran out of ideas.: ( Maybe next chapter.

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39 Chapter 39: Lack of Evidence

“I can offer you nothing but blood sweat toil and tears.” Sir Winston Churchill 

And that is what I offer you, for the road to victory is full of tragedy and despair, but perhaps Harry and Cho can find the love they have for each other, and defeat Marietta and the mysterious Society and save the magic world. Anyway there is one more thing, Marietta since the beginning, has never acted alone. And I’m not talking about the shape shifter either. Just please hang in there. Thanks for everyone’s support.

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40 Chapter 40: Torment in Room #473

Well, this is my new chapter. It takes place the night of the last one. I’ll try to finish. If I don’t then try to imagine that Harry and Cho have a happy ending. Thanks again for posting reviews.

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41 Chapter 41: The Deal with the Devil

Okay, well here is Chapter 41. Harry’s just had the nightmare/memory, and been woken up by Ron and Neville. Cho tries to comfort her friends, and runs into Marietta, and Danielle in the girl’s bathroom. Marietta also implements one of her plans to get Cho on her side. Also remember those pictures that Collin and Dennis Creevey took?

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42 Chapter 42: Professor Ian Watson

Hello again everyone, I’m sorry to say that this is not a very good chapter, but it’s setting up a better one. I’ll make it up to everyone, Dumbledore in next chapter. I promise!

It’s not very well written, but I’m sure I don’t do hateful speeches to well, and maybe that’s a good thing. I researched the speeches of Nazi’s, the KKK, and several Islamic extremist groups to get an idea of how racist people think. It went toward the speech, but believe me, I don’t think that way. Anyway here it is, sorry it’s taking so long t

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43 Chapter 43: A Place in the Ministry

OK everyone, I have to issue a very serious apology to you all. I promised that I would have Dumbledore play a prominent roll in this chapter, and believe me, it was my every intention to do so. But I realized that it would leave a lot of plot holes to do so, and I don’t want that. I will have a lot about the society explained in the next chapter, and I’m very, very sorry about not being able to keep my promise. I thank everyone for their reviews, and hope that I can keep in interesting for you.

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44 Chapter 44: A Crime from Long Ago.

Hello again everyone. Well, this is chapter 44, and it lets you know what the society really has planed for the muggle, and wizarding world, and what the history of Professor Watson and Dumbledore is. Also Marietta gives a report to her leader. The whole thing takes place right after Cho leaves the room, after telling off Professor Watson off, which is why it takes Dumbledore a little time to get to Watson. Thanks to all who post a review:)

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