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Rating
Mature
Chapters
14
Words
32,134
Characters
Dumbledore, Lupin, McGonagall, Sirius, Lily, James, Regulus, Pettigrew, Voldemort, OC
Primary Relationship
James/Lily
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/OC, Remus/OC, Sirius/OC, Other Pairing
Genre(s)
Horror/Dark, Romance
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
153
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-09-01 9:53pm
Last Chapter
2008-09-14 2:00pm
Last Updated
2008-11-23 12:39am

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1 A Change Has Come

“James, are you okay?” The words had escaped her lips before she could stop them. Taking a quick glance at her hands, she returned her gaze to James. He was staring at her, his eyes piercing her very soul. He was in pain, and Lily could see it.
After a moment of piercing silence, James shook his head. Tears prickled the brims of his eyes, threatening to overflow. 

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2 Chapter Two

Lily stared into his hazel eyes, and counted from ten to zero in her head. Now was the time to tell him why he didn’t leave Sasha. “Because… you don’t want top be the boy that dumps the girl. You also don’t want to break her heart.”

"Whoa Evans, you made me sound like a decent guy."

She swatted his arm playfully. "For the first and last time Potter."

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3 Chapter Three

Lily stared up into his eyes. Hazel met Green. The song ended, and another started. This time a perfect melody, no-one –not even the sex God Sirius Black- could pick. It was a song Lily had heard once before, on a Muggle movie. The lyrics had been perfectly put together, and the singer had sung them wonderfully. 


 

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4 Chapter Four

Sirius and Remus sat helplessly in the corner of the Head’s Common room, holding back their own tears.  Only once had they seen James lose control.  That time was when James found out that his grandparents had been murdered by Lord Voldemort.  And only Sirius had seen James break down when he found out about his mother’s illness.

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5 Chapter Five

James put the photo in his pocket and said a quick thankyou.  He then turned his attention to the next photo.  His heart skipped a beat.  It was a photo of his mother and … him.  He wasn’t visible, since his mother was only five months pregnant.  “Thankyou Lily.”

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6 Chapter Six

The doors closed loudly a few minutes later, and all heads turned towards the stage. Fireworks erupted around the room; girls squealed loudly in excitement, and the guys laughed at the sudden squeals. “Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen, I am…”

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7 Chapter Seven

James took Lily’s hand and squeezed it. “Hopefully this time it works,” he joked. He let her hand slip from his, and turned towards the sky. Suddenly the clock struck twelve. Loud bangs of fireworks startles the unsuspecting seventh years. Fireworks appeared from all ends of the castle, even from the middle of the lake. Dumbledore stood at the front of everyone, clapping loudly and smiling like a little school girl.

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8 Chapter Eight

Voldemort snickered down at her. He sneered into her face and started laughing. “What is a seventh year going to do to someone like me? You’re no more of a match them your parents.” He laughed and laughed. His Death Eaters also began laughing. One of them came forward and kicked Lily in the stomach. She groaned in pain and rolled around on the floor.

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9 Chapter Nine

“Here, drink this.” Allan handed over the bottle, and Lily grabbed it without thinking. She drank a mouthful, and swallowed, before it came into effect. She began to feel different. Strange. Her blissful memories of the past night, and other times faded away into the back of her mind, lying forgotten. The only days she remembered, were those, with Allan.

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10 Chapter Ten

Contains a Major Sex Scene

James smiled as Guinevere pushed pancakes in front him. Guinevere winked at him. “My mum’s secret recipe; you’re the only person that’s not family to ever try them.”

“Well I won’t tell anyone.”

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11 Chapter Eleven

A piece of parchment slivered to the floor and landed at his feet. “No,” he whispered as he glanced down at the parchment quickly. “This can’t be happening. Not now! It’s ruining everything,” he cried pathetically into the open room. He shook slightly as he bent down slowly to pick up the parchment. Tears filled his eyes with each word he read, and re-read.

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12 Chapter Twelve

“You cheated on her!  You got another girl pregnant.  Who’s the unfaithful one?”

“I never cheated on her.  She dumped me!  She broke it off with me, before I even slept with Guinevere.  She’s the one that broke my heart; she’s the one that decided I wasn’t good enough for her.  She’s the one that said she didn’t love me and headed back to that Allan bitch.”

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13 Chapter Thirteen

“I can’t.”  And he kissed her deeply on the lips, before quietly pulling away.  It was the hardest moment of his life: leaving her.

And he left.

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14 Chapter Fourteen

The spell hit Snape in the chest, blowing him over the curses of other battles.  James limped slowly over towards Lily.  He barely reached her before he collapsed beside her.  “Relashio,” whispered James before he collapsed into a coma.  The last thing he heard was a woman screaming his name.

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