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Rating
Mature
Chapters
5
Words
5,787
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, A. Longbottom, F. Longbottom, Lily, James, Pettigrew
Primary Relationship
Other Pairing
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Sirius/OC
Genre(s)
Fluff, Humor, Romance
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Strong Language, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
34
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2008-06-16 1:51pm
Last Chapter
2009-03-19 2:35pm
Last Updated
2009-03-19 2:35pm

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1 Can't you tell? — Chapter 1

    Frank Longbottom. God, he was beautiful. Perfect dark hair, perfect green eyes, Gryffindor chaser and heartthrob – he was perfect. Why would he want someone like me? Alice Prewitt, I was nothing special, with my wavy brown hair and plain brown eyes. Who was I kidding, he didn't even do as much as glance in my direction.*edited. 

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2 Can't you tell? — Chapter 2

       I sighed; I had no answer to her question. Because, the truth was, I knew full well that he wasn’t the least bit worth it. I knew that he used girls, but, I couldn’t help it, I had fallen for him long ago and my feelings for him ran deep. *edited. 

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3 Can't you tell? — Chapter 3

      I looked away, still blushing and realized that I knew two things for certain. One, my feelings for Frank were stronger than ever. And two, he definitely knew who I was now. *edited.

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4 Can't you tell? — Chapter 4

        He nodded, processing what I had just said. ‘Yeah, I think I’ve found that in someone. You see, there’s this girl, and she’s beautiful, I didn’t know I could ever feel this way about someone. But, the feelings i have for her are so different, I really see myself being with her, I want to be with her.’ He said, smiling. *edited.

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5 Can't you tell? — Chapter 5

‘I fancy you, Frank Longbottom, and have for a very long time.’ I said, letting it all out. I exhaled, waiting for the worst.*edited.

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