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Rating
15+
Chapters
19
Words
62,438
Characters
Lupin, Snape, Sirius, Lily, James, Lucius, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Remus/OC
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Sirius/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Humor, Romance
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
51
Status
Completed
First Published
2009-10-13 3:26pm
Last Chapter
2011-05-18 9:31am
Last Updated
2011-05-18 9:31am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 A video camera, a storm, and the Twins. (uh oh)

Kiley sat on the warm, dry ground, clutching her head. She set the video camera she had been clutching down on her lap as she whimpered in pain. Her head was spinning and she couldn't tell which was up and which was down.

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2 "I sense there's something in the wind..."

"I, I'm sorry, but no one by the name of Harry Potter goes to this school," Severus said, getting an idea, "but there is a boy by the name of Potter. I'll go get him. Don't move!" he instructed, starting to run to the door. "Not a single muscle!" he called over his shoulder as he ran.
 

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3 "Can you feel the love tonight?"

“Would you like to sit with us?” Lupin asked, surprising everyone. James’s mouth hung open, and Sirius looked like he had just swallowed the fork he had been levitating. Peter’s head swung from James and Sirius, not knowing which one to imitate.
 

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4 Letters in detention...

“SIRIUS BLACK, REMUS LUPIN, JAMES POTTER, SEVERUS SNAPE, AND MILEY RIDDLE!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ALL HAVE DETENTION FOR THE NEXT MONTH!!!!!!!!” she screamed, pointing at each one when she said their names.
 

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5 "It's like a hole has been punched through my chest."

“I, I just miss my friends, I barely know anyone, I don’t want detention, I’ve never even had detention before! I just want to go home!” she whispered, sniffling and looked at him with bright eyes that where filled with unshed tears.
 

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6 "Keep your feet on the ground, when your heads in the clouds.."

“Well, if you’re caught up in potions, than you should do fine in everything else,” Severus commented. He looked through his book. “Hey, what do you think of a spell that in capitates your opponent?”
 

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7 Twirl in, twirl out, dancing in the night...

“In two days we will be having a ball. A formal ball, with elegant dresses and crisp tuxedo’s. All who are in detention will be given a pass for these next two days, excluding tonight. The only thing is that you may not take a member of your house to the ball with you. You must ask someone not within your house. Does everyone understand?”
 

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8 "Look in my eyes. Your killing me, killing me. All i wanted was you.."

“So, you have two boys with you?” she asked, “two boys that are in love with you?”

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9 "Something has changed with in me. something is not the same.."

Suddenly Severus started to laugh. He clutched his side as he bent forward, trying to breath. Then Lestrange started to laugh despite himself. Everyone just stared at them. Then Narcissa gave a delicate giggle as she caught onto whatever the joke was.

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10 "It's to quiet in here!"


More people started to flood in and the music started to play. Kiley tried to tell him something but he couldn’t hear her. She finally just gave up and waved goodbye and melted into the crowd in search of one of her fellow Marauders. It took awhile for her to find someone; everyone was dancing and singing to the music, making it very loud and chaotic.

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11 "I tried to kill the pain. But only brought more..."

“Please, please!” she managed to strangle out. She couldn’t turn around and look at whoever was torturing her. Moving only made the pain worse.

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12 "It's your life, watcha gonna do? the world is watchin you."

“Having fun,” she said, not stopping for even a single moment. She was grinning like a lunatic. Then she stopped dancing and plopped down on the ground in front of Lupin’s chair. She gave them a sweet, perfectly innocent look and asked at their gawking faces, “What?”

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13 "And only surrender will help you now. I love you please see...."

She glanced over her shoulder to see he was following her, his eyes narrowed. She ran faster and faster, tripping and tearing her dress as she went. She noticed a tree in the distance and recalled it to be the Whomping Willow.

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14 "Do you know what's worth fighting for, when it's not worth dying for?"

"Are you afraid of my now?" he asked next, looking down at the floor.

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15 "Train your fingers for battle..."

She almost added that she could show them the memory, but she remembered that her father was in it, and it would certainly throw everything she worked to keep a secret down the drain.

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16 "You're drowning in your imperfection..."

Kiley quickly sped up her steps, knowing instantly that someone was in trouble. She got to the source of the noise. It was professor Slughorns potions cabinet. Perplexed, she opened the door slowly, and found someone sprawled on the floor,

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17 "There's miles to go, but we both know that we'll make it.."

“Just remember,” Lupin said, pointing to the Marauder bracelet on her wrist, “your one of them.”

“But much cuter,” she said jokingly.

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18 "i'm going home, to the place where i belong..."

“Wolfie?” she muttered weakly, her eyes fuzzing over just like last time. “Prongs? Padfoot? Flower? Severus?”

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19 "All of my memories keep you here... inside a moment..."

“Those were good times. I sure miss those times, those people,” Lupin said, sighing sadly yet again.

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