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Rating
15+
Chapters
15
Words
23,423
Characters
Fred, OC, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
Other Pairing
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Drama, Humor, Romance
Era
Next Generation
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
13
Status
Completed
First Published
2010-03-05 4:21am
Last Chapter
2012-11-19 9:03pm
Last Updated
2012-11-19 9:03pm

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1 The Hogwarts Express

“Hey, it’s not like the Hogwarts Express hit you,” he pointed out, his eyes twinkling.

“Let’s bring up that subject of size again,” I told him, and it was my turn to do the eye sweeping.

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2 The Artist and The Manticores

“I wanted a quiet place to pick my nose,” I replied crossly. After losing to his second in command, there was no way I was letting these boys get the better of me tonight.

“You need to leave.”

“Oh, I’m not going anywhere.”

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3 Drawing Conclusions

“How many kisses does it take to change your mind?” he asked, pulling me to his side.

I dropped my bag on the floor and became comfortable in the embrace. I’d never pass a chance like this. “As many as the stars in the sky,” I replied meeting his eyes. They were back to amber.

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4 Oh Ye Rotten Boys

“There is your victim,” James pointed to a tiny blonde bundle making its way towards the shop.

Take a deep breath Edrea, I told myself. Potter thinks girls are wimps. Show him his conclusion is wrong. Boy, I wanted to do that so badly. I can throw a mean hook too. One just aims... right? Seriously, there were beefier boys in Hogwarts that I could take on. This one looked like he didn’t even attend Hogwarts. “Hi,” I stopped him. “I’m Edrea Hall. What is your name?”

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5 Depingere Fred…

“I know you were mad at us for that Hogsmeade incident,” he pointed out. “This plan has your name written all over it.”

I rolled my eyes. “Hogwarts Express I’m not like you.”

He grinned. This person in front of me looked like he had spotted a Bludger. “I’m game, Hall.”

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6 The Manticore and His Dilemma


“You look ill,” Scorpius’s voice interrupted my musings.

“I'm infatuated with a brown-eyed girl who keeps laughing at me.” I muttered dryly.

“Welcome to the club,” announced James grinning.

The list of things that amused us required a thorough evaluation. “I'm already in a club. I don’t need another.”

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7 The Artist's New Realiazation

“You followed what,” she laughed loudly, sprawling carelessly across my bed. “Edrea, you have no such organ.”

I was right. This girl would make a lousy Healer. “Did you wake me up to criticize me?”

“I came to collect my payment.”

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8 Afternoon Tea with the Girls

 “Can you imagine Potter holding this?” Claudia mused, setting the cup on the table.

“You like picking on my boyfriend,” Marcia accused lightly.

“Who else would look ridiculous holding a teacup?” Claudia asked laughingly.

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9 The Artist's is Presented

“It’s toxic to your mental health.”

“Like trying to understand James,” Claudia said, taking refuge behind me as Marcia had started to mould a snowball. She started laughing. “I can’t help it, and I’m sorry Marcia. I promise you when this day ends I will go back to teasing Edrea. I promise.”

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10 The Boys’ Shadow Prank

 “We are helping,” Bryony affirmed.

“This thing will get bloody,” James announced passionately, his mood taking a turn for the best.

“James, you are despicable,” Rose reprimanded harshly, leave it to her to try to make the four conform to decorum.

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11 The Artist is Seventeen

“Relax, Queen E,” she said picking up the book. “Use this time to plan my birthday since I won’t forgive you if you put half an effort on my birthday.”

“I had thought of including the Manticores’s help with the snack selection seeing how thoughtful they were during Saturday’s meeting.”

“Fine,” she relented grudgingly. “You can paint the lanterns.”

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12 The Manticore’s New Colours

“Look who's complaining about the two of us not meeting since the beginning of time.”

 “Your maladies are infectious,” she pointed out with a grin. “But there was that immature period, where I never liked you so we would have still missed something.”

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13 The Extent of Rottenness

“What you don’t know is that those two used to sabotage our pranks before we formed the Manticores. They have been at it since then.”

“Aren’t you backing off the wrong tree?” Claudia enquired. “You are ready to leave your friends because of a little thing as never being able to throw stinking pellets at fellow students.”

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14 Nothing like The Present

“You are wondering why we all went with Slytherin did this and Gryffindor said that,” Fred started, beside me.

  “And Hufflepuff,” I threw back with a meaningful smile.

“And Ravenclaw,” Bryony added.

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15 Epilogue

“I approve,” Mum said.

“Thanks for helping me pick this dress,” I replied kissing her cheek.

She smiled. “I hope he does something about those replies you think are humorous.”

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