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Rating
Mature
Chapters
5
Words
11,378
Characters
Sirius, A. Longbottom, Lily, James, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
Sirius/Lily
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Humor, Romance, Young Adult
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse
Story Reviews
7
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2010-05-17 3:25pm
Last Chapter
2010-06-20 2:28pm
Last Updated
2010-06-20 2:28pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Day 1

By this point, their faces were about a foot and a half apart. The bloke seemed completely at ease about this, but Lily could feel a sudden magnetism pulling her gradually in his direction.

Her heart was racing...

1,572 5
2 Days 4 - 8

He put his forefinger under her chin and tilted her head up to look at him again. Though it was quite brief, his touch sent sparks right to her extremities. “So how about that break, then?” he inquired, and Lily blinked. Had he mentioned something about that while she zoned out? Was he asking her out on a date?

1,668 1
3 Day 18

Mrs. Evans clucked her tongue as she shook her head. “I just can’t understand it. Working yourself so hard at such a young age. You should be focusing on your teen years, not spending it in a stuffy little pet shop with some old woman.”

2,801 0
4 Day 13

Lily chuckled. “Yes,” she agreed, “he does sound a bit like he could be your mum, or something.” As she gazed at him thoughtfully, playfulness in her emerald eyes, his gray ones clouded over. His face bore a dark, brooding expression for a very brief moment; so brief, in fact, that she wasn’t completely sure she’d seen it at all, because as soon as it had appeared, it vanished.

3,092 0
5 Day 20

“This isn’t you. This isn’t the same boy that I had the most amazing time with a week ago,” she told him in a steady, sure voice. “You like me, and I like you. It’s enough for me. Why can’t it be enough for you?” You’re just running away, she wanted to add, but she bit down on her tongue to keep it from slipping out.

2,245 1

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