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Rating
15+
Chapters
10
Words
30,714
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, Regulus, Lucius, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Remus/OC, Sirius/OC, Other Pairing
Genre(s)
Humor, Romance, Angst
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
30
Status
Abandoned
First Published
2010-07-03 6:25pm
Last Chapter
2011-02-06 9:00pm
Last Updated
2011-02-06 9:00pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Sad smile

“Just five more months Josi” He whispered huskily into my straight black hair, I could tell he was holding back tears of his own “Then when I am 18 I can get my own place and you can come home to me for the holidays ok?” I nodded against his chest, wiping my eyes dry.  He gently pulled back keeping his large hands on my thin shoulders and looked at me.  I looked back, my misty, unseeing eyes still slightly watery. 

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2 The begining

The outside noise had dimmed so all I heard were the parents that were yelling to their kids and not their normal chatter, but to replace the sound I had lost there were new sounds and voices.  Kids everywhere, yelling, shouting, squealing, talking, and laughing. I had never heard this much happy noise before. 

1,866 2
3 A rather eventful train ride

I closed my eyes again, concentrating on freezing my face so it wouldn’t betray my disappointment. Forbidden tears welled up in my eyes, threatening to spill out from under my closed lids.

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4 Hogwarts is beautiful... at least thats what they tell me

“Welcome to Hogwarts,” Said a crisp, firm, female voice. “The start of the year banquet is about to start, but before we can begin you must be sorted into your houses.

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5 Over the first hurdle

I could hear the uneasy whispers come from the crowd.  The hat was taking an awfully long time to decide.  It kept going back and forth between the houses.  My cheeks started to burn as their stares became more intense.

2,365 2
6 Ignoring Prejudices

I smiled into my pillow. I was a witch.  I had a wonderfully comfortable bed, amazing food waiting for me in the great hall, and even some friends.  I then fell into a deep dreamless sleep with a smile on my face.

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7 Goose Bumps

I heard a shrill squeal and snorting, mixed in with the outraged but confused yells.
“Time to go!” I exclaimed to the boys and spun around pulling on Remus’ hand to get him started. We all ran until we couldn’t run anymore and we were breathless with laughter. 

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8 Not Quite a Love Letter

“Ooooh! Was it a loooove note?” Sirius cried in an annoyingly high voice.  I think he was pretending to sound like a girl.  It didn’t work. 

“Kind of,” James said regretfully.

“What?!” Sirius exclaimed forgetting his ‘girly’ voice. He had a ‘big brother attitude’ too.  I sighed.

2,861 5
9 Of Relizations, Grudges, and Songs

“We’ll stop bugging you if you just do it,” said Alice in a sing-songy voice. 

  “Ugh,” I moaned.  “Fine,” the girls squealed and all the guys high fived.

“I knew you would come around!” James cried, “Now Padfoot you owe me 3 Sickles.” Sirius groaned

3,681 2
10 Flashbacks Suck

Somehow in my mind I knew that it wasn’t just a dream, I knew deep down somewhere that I had finally remembered how I lost my sight.  And it scared me senseless.

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