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Rating
15+
Chapters
5
Words
6,554
Characters
Neville, Luna, Draco, Pansy, Ginny, Blaise (M)
Primary Relationship
Draco/OC
Secondary Relationship(s)
Harry/Ginny
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance, Young Adult
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
4
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2010-09-28 8:12pm
Last Chapter
2010-10-31 6:54pm
Last Updated
2010-10-31 6:54pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Threshold

He opened the door wider, sweeping his hand into the room.
“Welcome, Ms. Burke,” he said, still smirking.

656 0
2 Brooms

Then I grabbed the girl’s hand. Her skin went from cold to warm under my touch. I smirked, a victorious feeling washing over me. Beatrice looked distrustful.
“Come on.”

1,320 1
3 Train

I looked to Draco for some form of support, but his face was turned away, towards the window, pretending to be oblivious to the whole situation. Disgusted, I released Zabini’s arm. He sat back down, rubbing his wrist and glaring still. Pansy’s mouth was open in a surprised o. The sandy-haired boy was nowhere to be seen.
“I’ve had enough,” I said, grabbed my things, and stalked from the carriage.

2,030 1
4 Sorting

Despite my anger, I could feel something go warm inside me at her closeness, the fact that I was touching her. I quickly pushed it down, too angry to deal with these strange, tender feelings welling up inside me. I wanted to stop crushing her arms, to stop hurting her, but my pride kept my hands where they were.

1,522 1
5 Lost

My breath created a mist before my eyes, and a crackling layer of ice was forming on the suits of armor that guarded the main entrance on either side. Dread crept into my heart as I looked between them.

1,026 1

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