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Rating
Mature
Chapters
4
Words
13,969
Characters
Scorpius, Albus, Rose, OC, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
Other Pairing
Secondary Relationship(s)
Rose/Scorpius
Genre(s)
Drama, Horror/Dark, Romance
Era
Next Generation
Advisory
Strong Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
6
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2011-05-19 4:26am
Last Chapter
2011-07-18 4:34pm
Last Updated
2011-07-18 4:34pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 The Damage Done

“You had another drink, danced like a moron, tried to snog with Charlotte Wood – which is why your jaw is probably sore right now. She punches pretty hard. Then you spent most of the evening drinking more and hiding from Lewis who wanted you dead for hitting on his sister. I found you by the pond with half a bottle of fire whiskey mumbling about how much you loved me, and then proceeded to hug everyone and tell them you loved them until your dad helped me get you into your bed. All in all you did a superb job of embarrassing yourself.” Scorpius summarized.

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2 Laura Smith

Albus turned behind him to see none other than Laura Smith walking rather clumsily down the path towards the lake. She was waving her hands madly, a hanky dangling in her left hand. She seemed to still be crying, and her hair was in an even bigger mess than before.

“I should have stayed home.” She said, stopping only a few metres behind Albus. Looking up, she pushed her hair behind her ears.

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3 Snubbed

The students, for the most part were all chatting in their various groups, but Albus noticed how Laura Smith stood away from the others. Leaning against the stone wall, she seemed to be having an intense staring contest with the floor. Her hair was pulled into two French braids, and it seemed as if she was wearing an unnatural amount of make-up. Albus saw her cousin, Eliza steal looks every second or so as she talked amongst her friends. But Laura did not notice these, and it wasn’t until the doors to the charms classroom opened that Laura looked up from the floor.

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4 Developments

“BACK OFF!” Laura shouted. Albus had gotten so heated he hadn’t noticed how close he had moved to Laura. Their faces were barely centimetres apart. Albus could see every line, every crease and every freckle on her pale face. Staring in her eyes for the first time he could remember, he was a little surprised to see the fear in her dark green eyes. Albus relaxed, and suddenly Laura gave him a shove with both hands. Albus lost his balance and fell to the ground with a ‘thud’.

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