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Rating
12+
Chapters
5
Words
4,553
Characters
Teddy, Scorpius, Albus, James (II), Lily (II), Hugo, Rose, Victoire
Primary Relationship
Rose/Scorpius
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Romance
Era
Next Generation
Advisory
Mild Language, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
1
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2011-11-15 3:47pm
Last Chapter
2012-02-23 4:29am
Last Updated
2012-02-23 4:29am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 bumping into trouble

this is my very first fan fiction and my very first chapter i know its short but i wanted to take it slow and get some feedback on my writing before there was too much to redo please please please review i really want my writing to improve i hope you like it:)

508 1
2 smell the roses

what could he need to talk about? More importantly, what did he need to talk about that we couldn’t now?” Scorpius wants to meet Rose but what does he want?  

 

on another note please review i really want to get better i hope you like the chapter i know its short i'm really sorry :/

604 0
3 Acquiring the cloak

Rose gets a suprise delivery from her cousin. 
i have a few things to say about this chapter, one i'm sorry its short i wrote like six pages and had to cut it somewhere and this was the only way i could do it so its sort of pointless but please don't hold this against me and finally i want to thank everyone for reading and beg for you to leave feedback i REAAALLY want to get as good as sasha who is like my editor without her and katherine i wouldn't have written this so..

716 0
4 a smudge, a blur, a boy!

Rose goes to meet Scorpius below the willow tree, will he turn up or is it all a plot to get her in trouble?
 
 

1,260 0
5 So I Pushed Him...

 Rose is at her meeting with Scorpius, what does he need to say to her? how will she react?

1,465 0

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