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Rating
Mature
Chapters
14
Words
50,491
Characters
Harry, Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore, Snape, Sirius, Voldemort, Draco, Ginny, Neville
Primary Relationship
Harry/Ginny
Secondary Relationship(s)
Ron/Hermione
Genre(s)
Romance, Action/Adventure, AU
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Contains profanity, Strong violence, Scenes of a sexual nature, Substance abuse, Sensitive topic/issue/theme, Spoilers
Story Reviews
16
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2015-02-15 8:47pm
Last Chapter
2015-07-28 8:25pm
Last Updated
2015-07-28 8:25pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Under the Stairs

Beginning of a long novel. Please review, it will definitely get me motivated to write the next chapter. This is my first story, so please give me some feedback. I have some really unique ideas with this plot, so please keep me motivated to write! All belongs to JK Rowling, the only changes were an abusive childhood and the Battle of Hogwarts not ending the war.

2,640 1
2 My Most Dangerous Enemy

Harry seeks help from an unlikely source

4,095 0
3 The Kiss

The plan is put into action.

5,416 2
4 Yer a Wizard

Please note, I changed the date he went back to from July 31st to August 23rd. It just made more sense given what I have planned! Please read the note at the bottom of the chapter and give me some feedback! Good or bad, I want to know what you guys think!

2,961 1
5 Your Mother's Eyes

Please review and let me know what you think! This was a bit of a slower chapter, but it's mainly just developing the plot. I have a lot of twists and turns planned so try to hang in there! I know some of these conversations may seem a bit forced, but Harry is going into may of them with a specific goal in mind - which would make it a bit forced.

3,713 0
6 The Calm Before the Storm

Anticipation builds

3,562 0
7 The Rat

Sorry it's taken so long for me to update. I've been a bit discouraged by this site simply because the view count isn't very high, but I'll start posting new content whenever it's ready! I'm a bit behind right now, so you'll be seeing updates every few days or so (I have to wait for one chapter to get validated before I post another). I'm just finishing up chapter 10 right now, so you'll be seeing that soon enough!

3,605 1
8 Reunited

I know this is a shorter chapter and not much is going on, but it's necessary in order to advance the story. A lot is going on next chapter, so just hang in there! It will be posted soon!

2,105 1
9 The Trial of Peter Pettigrew

A lot going on in this chapter, please let me know what you think!! I know that my characterization is bold in this chapter, but hopefully you are able to understand why I think that each character would react in the way they do. Again, please let me know your opinion!!!

5,791 2
10 First Impressions

Author's Notes:
Please leave a quick review! Let me know what you think of the story so far.. I always get a bit excited when I see new review, so please help me out and leave one!

I'd like to give a quick thanks to my betas Arnel and RS223 for making this chapter much more readable!

3,086 1
11 The Revelation

Please review! A whole lot going on in this chapter, and I'm really curious about your thoughts on the conversation! I read every review, and really appreciate each one!

Shout-out to my betas Arnel and RS223 for making this chapter much more readable!

4,051 1
12 A Different Fate

The next chapter will be posted soon, it's already written and just being edited! I know this is getting old, but I really want you to review and let me know your thoughts! It really helps me write the story, and gives me inspiration and new ideas on exactly where the story is headed! I have a general sense, but when I write each chapter I find that I'll make an on the spot decision regarding a plot point, so this story will be pretty dynamic and I consider everything you have to say!

2,882 3
13 The Revelation II

Please review and let me know what you think! I'm really trying to stay within the canon's characterization, and I hope that you don't necessarily think Lupin is being the 'bad-guy'... he is just making the decision he thinks best. Let me know what you think of my characters, and if they are acting within JKR's universe!

3,426 2
14 Tri-Captains

Please review and let me know what you think... really though... pretty please?

3,158 1

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