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“:Prelude” Thanks to my Betas FriendofMolly and Arnel, and to JK Rowling who allows us to publish. You can find my stories, including current updates, on Fanfiction dot net and Wattpad dot com. Jet LaBarge. 2021 |
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CH 1 The Train Ride I want to welcome Arnel, who has agreed to Beta my story along with FriendofMolly. |
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CH 2 The Sorting I have a new Beta, Arnel, and she has suggested some major changes. I am grateful for her work. FriendofMolly, who has been my faithful Beta for most of this series, is still helping as well. Thanks to both. Check our Arnel’s stories; they are excellent. |
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CH 3 To The Dorms Thanks again to my Betas FriendofMolly and Arnel. |
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CH 4 “The First Saturday” Thanks again to my Betas, FriendofMolly and Arnel. If you have not read Arnel’s stories they are well worth reading. |
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CH 5 Quidditch When I have to rip out part of what I wrote, and rewrite parts of several chapters, I know I have a good team of Beta readers. Thank you, Arnel, for this chapter, and to FriendofMolly for previous critiques. |
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CH 6 “The First Classes” Thanks to my betas FriendofMolly and Arnel, and to JK Rowling who allows us to play in her universe. |
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CH 7 “Potions, Herbology, and a New Broom” Again thaks to Arnel for beta work. |
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CH 8 Transfiguration and Scones Tigger is a character from the Christopher Robin books by A.A. Milne. Cleo saw the Disney movie loosely based on the books, and the song is from the movie. Rose had not seen the movie, but Hermione had the books, and Rose read them. Reviewers and my Beta’s inspired that part of the chapter; thank you Arnel and FriendofMolly
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CH 9 Paranoia, Potions and Progress with Elves “I am the (author)” is a direct quote from a student to their professor. If you want the story, ask in a review. Arnel and FriendofMolly did their magic on this chapter as well, and I cannot thank them enough. |
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CH 10 The First Quidditch Match The brothers face off on the Quidditch Pitch. Minor corrections (for a change) by FriendofMolly and Arnel. |
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CH 11 Albus’s Wand This is the first chapter where you begin to see more clearly the reason for the title of this book. Once again FriendofMolly and Arnel made critical corrections. |
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CH 12 Harry Investigates The story will not ignore Harry, who has to try and figure out what is going on at Hogwarts. He learns of dramatic changes at home as well. Thank you to Arnel for some key edits. |
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CH 13 Win-GAR-dium Levi-o-sa Reviews keep fan fiction writers writing. Thank you to everyone who has written a review. Arnel has again helped shape part of this chapter, plus correcting some stupid mistakes.
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CH 14 The Dark Arts I want to thank Arnel, who continues to demonstrate what a fantastic Beta she is by catching stupid mistakes and canon problems, and FriendofMolly for a key change. |
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Ch 15 The Start of Christmas Holidays, 2017 Henry Granger and Lilly Evans Granger are the subjects of my short story Tiny Tim, a Shaggy Kneazle Story, on Fanfiction.net. For my American readers, a jumper is what an American would call a sweater. Arnel had me change the way a scene was written, in addition to her usual corrections, and FriendofMolly worked her magic as well. Thanks to all my Beta readers. |
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Ch 16 Harry, Albus and the Elder Wand You knew that Albus could not keep the Elder Wand secret from his father for very long. How is Harry going to handle this? More critical edits by Arnel.
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CH 17 New Clothes for Cleopatra More changes by both FriendofMolly and Arnel, my excellent Beta readers. Cleo meets Luna, and tries playing a little Quidditch. |
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Ch 18 Christmas Eve The poem in this chapter is from Winnie the Pooh by A.A.Milne. I gave my set to my wife the Christmas we were engaged. |
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Ch 19 Christmas Week More of the fantastic corrections and consistency checking that Arnel does so well, plus a couple of very nice contributions. |
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CH 20 “Prophesy and Perfume” Thanks to my fantastic Beta Arnel, I now know that what Americans call a “ball point pen” is a “biro” in Great Britain. As usual, both Arnel and FriendofMolly contributed to this chapter. Thank all of you for reading. We would really appreciate reviews.
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CH 21 The Spring Gryffindor Quidditch Match Thanks to Arnel and FriendofMolly for their Betaing. |
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CH 22 Gender and a Twitchy Witch This chapter is dedicated to Jackie, our youngest, who was born male but is transitioning to female. Chloe has been somewhat masculine from my first writing of her years ago. As always, helpful edits from Arnel and FriendofMolly. |
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CH 23 First Visit with the Centaurs HPFF fans, I am back to adding to the story, and you should see at least a couple of chapters a week for a while. Chapter 20 was misplaced, and the correct chapter 20 was added. You may want to go back and read it. |
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CH 24 The Twentieth Anniversary of the Battle of Hogwarts More critical changes because of Arnel’s great Beta work. |
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CH 25 Minerva Marie Potter Thanks again to Arnel for corrections and some suggested changes. |
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CH 26 An Embarrassing Visit to the Centaurs The end of the school year. |
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CH 27 Switzerland Fred Flintstone and Barney Rubble are Hanna-Barbara characters. I want to thank Arnel for more major improvements. |
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CH 28 The Explosion and its Aftermath I have lost my most excellent Beta, Arnel, who is on to other projects. Thank you, Arnel, for all your work, including your work on these two final chapters. |
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CH 29 The International Confederation of Witches and Wizards If you want to know more about Aunt Luna Lovegood and dungarees I can recommend Northunbrian’s “Strangers at Drakeshaugh,” chapter 13. |
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