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Rating
15+
Chapters
35
Words
229,889
Characters
Harry, Ron, Hermione
Primary Relationship
Harry/Hermione
Secondary Relationship(s)
Ron/Hermione, Ron/Luna
Genre(s)
Drama, Horror/Dark, Mystery, Romance, Action/Adventure, Angst, Young Adult
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Contains profanity, Mild violence, Strong violence, Scenes of a mild sexual nature, Sensitive topic/issue/theme
Story Reviews
63
Status
Completed
First Published
2019-12-29 2:03pm
Last Chapter
2020-01-07 12:00am
Last Updated
2020-06-28 11:15pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 1: Chapter Four – The Seven Potters

We start off a short way into the actual book. There have been no alterations to the previous three chapters. Also, in this version, I have decided to set the story five years later. So, instead of the events of this book taking place across 1997-98, they actually take place in 2002-03. So in this canon, Harry was born on July 31, 1985. I always felt James and Lily were a bit too young. I felt this was a way to match it with the films, and I also felt it was a good way to have some more modern tweaks in the book too, without making a drastic change to the timeline.

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2 2: Chapter Five – The Fallen Warrior

Harry and co. arrive back at the Burrow.

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3 3: Chapter Six – The Ghoul In The Pyjamas

Harry, Ron and Hermione begin to plan their next move.

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4 4: Chapter Seven – The Will Of Albus Dumbledore

The trio welcome an unexpected guest.

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5 5: Chapter Eight – The Wedding

In which Harry falls for Hermione all over again, and the battle starts for real.

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6 6: Chapter Nine – A Place To Hide

Nowhere is safe...

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7 7: Chapter Ten – Kreacher's Hat

AN: So, there's a change in this chapter which initially was rather throwaway, but I just loved making little tweaks and ultimately, it plays a much more important part in the story than I initially imagined.

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8 8: Chapter Eleven – The Bribe

Voldemort takes control

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9 9: Chapter Twelve – Magic Is Might

I thought the Ministry adventure was well done in the film, so merged it with the book.

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10 10: Chapter Thirteen – The Muggleborn Registration Commission

Hopefully the blend of movie/book works well enough, here!

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11 11: Chapter Fourteen – The Thief

The Horcrux Hunt begins...

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12 12: Chapter Fifteen – The Goblin's Revenge

Okay, this is a mammoth of a chapter, but it needed to be done. There's a slight mix of book and film – including a deleted scene – in here and I took a bit of a creative licence with the chronology, so a slight tweak in how certain events play out, too.

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13 13: Chapter Sixteen – O Children

So, to balance out a huge chapter, now a much shorter one. This is pretty much all of my own invention - but uses inspiration from the book and, clearly, the film in the main. I just couldn't leave this scene out and I hope that this way of having it in works.

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14 14: Chapter Seventeen – Godric's Hollow

I always felt the film really did them going to Godric's Hollow as themselves justice, so I wanted to keep it that way. I also feel Harry would be stubborn enough to demand it, too. Also, as mentioned in the story summary, I have altered the timeline of this slightly.

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15 15: Chapter Eighteen – Bathilda's Secret

Harry and Hermione have a lucky escape.

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16 16: Chapter Nineteen – The Life And Lies Of Albus Dumbledore

I really liked the setting of this scene in the film, so have made a slight tweak to just where Harry and Hermione went once they left Godric's Hollow. 

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17 17: Chapter Twenty – The Silver Doe

I toyed with doing this a few different ways but, after several re-writes, settled on this.

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18 18: Chapter Twenty-One – Xenophilius Lovegood

Okay, so another little tweak here and one that I thought it was right for Ron to introduce. 

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19 19: Chapter Twenty-Two – The Tale Of The Three Brothers

The trio have a narrow escape...

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20 20: Chapter Twenty-Three – The Deathly Hallows

I liked how angsty this got in terms of Harry feeling isolated, and wanted to keep that in. But there's also an important H/Hr moment in this canon that couldn't be ignored. Hopefully it doesn't jar too much with the overall feel of this part of the book.  There's also a bit of a callback to my version of HBP.

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21 21: Chapter Twenty-Four – Malfoy Mannor

Added in bits from the film here, too.

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22 22: Chapter Twenty-Five – The Wandmaker

Got some serious feels working these two chapters. 

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23 23: Chapter Twenty-Six – Shell Cottage

Please, review!

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24 24: Chapter Twenty-Seven – Gringotts

The trio attempt to infiltrate Gringotts.

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25 25: Chapter Twenty-Eight – The Final Hiding Place

The long night begins...

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26 26: Chapter Twenty-Nine – The Missing Mirror

Into the final stretch, now!

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27 27: Chapter Thirty – The Lost Diadem

Back to school...

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28 28: Chapter Thirty-One – The Sacking Of Severus Snape

Please review! 

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29 29: Chapter Thirty-Two – The Battle Of Hogwarts

So, from here on in there's going to be a fair mix of book/film. I'd also like to thank a writer called circinusphoenix for influencing me. Their story - Harry Potter and the Oroborus Light - was one of the first fanfics I read... many years ago now, but it's always stuck in my head! There's a homage to the battle scenes in their story in this chapter.

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30 30: Chapter Thirty-Three – The Elder Wand

Okay, so a pretty major diversion from both book and film here at one point, but one that I felt needed to be made.

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31 31: Chapter Thirty-Four – The Prince's Tale

A pretty emotional chapter, and another one I toyed with how to go about it. But the feeling of isolation Harry feels here is key, I think.

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32 32: Chapter Thirty-Five – The Forest Again

There was no chance I was leaving this scene out!

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33 33: Chapter Thirty-Six – King's Cross

Another chapter that took me a few versions to settle on. In the end, it's not that different at all to how it played out in the book, though it could have been very different had I gone ahead with a pretty major change. Perhaps I'll revisit as a One-Shot one day!

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34 34: Chapter Thirty-Seven – The Flaw In The Plan

Well, if you've made it this far, we're finally here! I actually preferred the way the film did the final duel, so I've gone with a mix of both. Hopefully, the action scenes make sense. Please review! 

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35 35: Epilogue - Nineteen Years Later

So, I'd like to take the time to thank everybody who has read this and HBP. I hope you enjoyed them both.

 

I have a few ideas for some stories based around this canon. No promises, but I will post them on here if it comes to doing them. I may also look at some one-shots/alternates to this canon, where I can explore some of the paths I decided against taking in these rewrites in order to stick to the main plot.

 

As always, please leave any feedback you have - good or bad, I want to know and improve! Thanks again for reading!

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