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1: Chapter Four – The Seven Potters We start off a short way into the actual book. There have been no alterations to the previous three chapters. Also, in this version, I have decided to set the story five years later. So, instead of the events of this book taking place across 1997-98, they actually take place in 2002-03. So in this canon, Harry was born on July 31, 1985. I always felt James and Lily were a bit too young. I felt this was a way to match it with the films, and I also felt it was a good way to have some more modern tweaks in the book too, without making a drastic change to the timeline. |
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2: Chapter Five – The Fallen Warrior Harry and co. arrive back at the Burrow. |
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3: Chapter Six – The Ghoul In The Pyjamas Harry, Ron and Hermione begin to plan their next move. |
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4: Chapter Seven – The Will Of Albus Dumbledore The trio welcome an unexpected guest. |
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5: Chapter Eight – The Wedding In which Harry falls for Hermione all over again, and the battle starts for real. |
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6: Chapter Nine – A Place To Hide Nowhere is safe... |
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7: Chapter Ten – Kreacher's Hat AN: So, there's a change in this chapter which initially was rather throwaway, but I just loved making little tweaks and ultimately, it plays a much more important part in the story than I initially imagined. |
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8: Chapter Eleven – The Bribe Voldemort takes control |
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9: Chapter Twelve – Magic Is Might I thought the Ministry adventure was well done in the film, so merged it with the book. |
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10: Chapter Thirteen – The Muggleborn Registration Commission Hopefully the blend of movie/book works well enough, here! |
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11: Chapter Fourteen – The Thief The Horcrux Hunt begins... |
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12: Chapter Fifteen – The Goblin's Revenge Okay, this is a mammoth of a chapter, but it needed to be done. There's a slight mix of book and film – including a deleted scene – in here and I took a bit of a creative licence with the chronology, so a slight tweak in how certain events play out, too. |
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13: Chapter Sixteen – O Children So, to balance out a huge chapter, now a much shorter one. This is pretty much all of my own invention - but uses inspiration from the book and, clearly, the film in the main. I just couldn't leave this scene out and I hope that this way of having it in works. |
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14: Chapter Seventeen – Godric's Hollow I always felt the film really did them going to Godric's Hollow as themselves justice, so I wanted to keep it that way. I also feel Harry would be stubborn enough to demand it, too. Also, as mentioned in the story summary, I have altered the timeline of this slightly. |
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15: Chapter Eighteen – Bathilda's Secret Harry and Hermione have a lucky escape. |
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16: Chapter Nineteen – The Life And Lies Of Albus Dumbledore I really liked the setting of this scene in the film, so have made a slight tweak to just where Harry and Hermione went once they left Godric's Hollow. |
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17: Chapter Twenty – The Silver Doe I toyed with doing this a few different ways but, after several re-writes, settled on this. |
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18: Chapter Twenty-One – Xenophilius Lovegood Okay, so another little tweak here and one that I thought it was right for Ron to introduce. |
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19: Chapter Twenty-Two – The Tale Of The Three Brothers The trio have a narrow escape... |
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20: Chapter Twenty-Three – The Deathly Hallows I liked how angsty this got in terms of Harry feeling isolated, and wanted to keep that in. But there's also an important H/Hr moment in this canon that couldn't be ignored. Hopefully it doesn't jar too much with the overall feel of this part of the book. There's also a bit of a callback to my version of HBP. |
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21: Chapter Twenty-Four – Malfoy Mannor Added in bits from the film here, too. |
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22: Chapter Twenty-Five – The Wandmaker Got some serious feels working these two chapters. |
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23: Chapter Twenty-Six – Shell Cottage Please, review! |
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24: Chapter Twenty-Seven – Gringotts The trio attempt to infiltrate Gringotts. |
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25: Chapter Twenty-Eight – The Final Hiding Place The long night begins... |
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26: Chapter Twenty-Nine – The Missing Mirror Into the final stretch, now! |
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27: Chapter Thirty – The Lost Diadem Back to school... |
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28: Chapter Thirty-One – The Sacking Of Severus Snape Please review! |
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29: Chapter Thirty-Two – The Battle Of Hogwarts So, from here on in there's going to be a fair mix of book/film. I'd also like to thank a writer called circinusphoenix for influencing me. Their story - Harry Potter and the Oroborus Light - was one of the first fanfics I read... many years ago now, but it's always stuck in my head! There's a homage to the battle scenes in their story in this chapter. |
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30: Chapter Thirty-Three – The Elder Wand Okay, so a pretty major diversion from both book and film here at one point, but one that I felt needed to be made. |
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31: Chapter Thirty-Four – The Prince's Tale A pretty emotional chapter, and another one I toyed with how to go about it. But the feeling of isolation Harry feels here is key, I think. |
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32: Chapter Thirty-Five – The Forest Again There was no chance I was leaving this scene out! |
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33: Chapter Thirty-Six – King's Cross Another chapter that took me a few versions to settle on. In the end, it's not that different at all to how it played out in the book, though it could have been very different had I gone ahead with a pretty major change. Perhaps I'll revisit as a One-Shot one day! |
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34: Chapter Thirty-Seven – The Flaw In The Plan Well, if you've made it this far, we're finally here! I actually preferred the way the film did the final duel, so I've gone with a mix of both. Hopefully, the action scenes make sense. Please review! |
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35: Epilogue - Nineteen Years Later So, I'd like to take the time to thank everybody who has read this and HBP. I hope you enjoyed them both.
I have a few ideas for some stories based around this canon. No promises, but I will post them on here if it comes to doing them. I may also look at some one-shots/alternates to this canon, where I can explore some of the paths I decided against taking in these rewrites in order to stick to the main plot.
As always, please leave any feedback you have - good or bad, I want to know and improve! Thanks again for reading! |
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