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1 This Moment

Hermione and Ron's first kiss. This is my first ever fanfic. I wrote it today, and I know it's not very good. I also know it is VERY cliche! Please, be kind, and review! I'd like some feedback so I know what to fix in the future. The Spoiler is small, only about one little event in OotP, but I still consider it a spoiler. DISCLAIMER:This was inspired by the song This Moment by Fiona Joyce. She owns the lyrics and the song. Also, J.K. Rowling, the genius behind HP, owns these characters, settings, and names (eg, Quidditch). I do not.

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