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Rating
12+
Chapters
21
Words
69,059
Characters
Harry, Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore, Snape, Voldemort, Draco, OC
Primary Relationship
Ron/Hermione
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Drama, General, Action/Adventure
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
207
Status
Completed
First Published
2005-03-11 4:55am
Last Chapter
2008-06-28 5:22pm
Last Updated
2008-06-28 5:22pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Detention's Escape

“Turn off the light,” he said, almost unaware of saying it.  “You try it Potter,” Snape growled.

3,870 24
2 Lost Accusations

Still lost, and still without Magic, Snape begins to piece things together after hearing what Harry talks about in his sleep.

2,601 12
3 Over the Hill and Through the Woods...

“Potter, the town will be there in the morning.”    “Yeah, well I thought school would be there in the morning."

1,815 9
4 In the Land of Shadows

“What’s that Harry?” Hermione asked him. Harry shrugged and unfolded the parchment.
“Oh no,” he groaned, and dropped it on the table.

1,979 18
5 Dark Detention

"Do not, make any mistakes Potter, or you will be serving another detention tomorrow correcting them."

2,739 10
6 Offerings of Confusion

Severus Snape looked at his watch, and gave up on looking over the papers, deciding that if the ten or fifteen he had seen were graded well, than the rest were too. If he would have been thinking straight, he could have made the boy stay and grade more, even though he hadn’t been that confident that he would do a good job.

2,696 17
7 The Tutor

“I don’t know how I get myself into these messes Hermione.” “What messes?” She seemed genuinely concerned now.

1,114 4
8 Grading Pains

Harry thought this would be easy... somebody else had other plans for him.

3,746 7
9 Draco Determined

Harry shook his head again. It was only grading papers, he told himself. What was the big deal to Draco?

4,397 7
10 Whispers in the Dark

Harry tried to step back from his desk to escape the horrible whisper, but still it only grew louder, “I am coming, I am coming, and you will fall to the Dark Lord!”

3,653 12
11 Occlusion

Ron nodded. “Whatever you want mate. Just… tell me what to do. Tell me something.”
Harry shook his head. “Don’t do anything.”

4,504 11
12 Acts of Contrition

“It’s no good,” he said, “I’m useless.”  From somewhere above him, Snape sighed. “You are not useless Potter, you just do not believe you will succeed.”  **FINALLY UPDATED!**

4,873 7
13 State of Mind

“Severus, perhaps he has not the control to master his mind at this moment… the mind can weave fantastic tales of betrayal and fantasies that never existed. But the heart… the heart is loyal to it’s owner, and will never lie." 
****We've officially crossed the 100 page mark in Microsoft Word with this chapter!****

4,438 4
14 Will By Force

“Now you know Harry Potter,” Voldemort’s voice filled his head, “that you cannot escape the wrath of Lord Voldemort.”

4,912 4
15 Snake and Dragon

Harry ran his fingers through his hair. “When is he coming?”  Draco didn’t answer, only looked at the ground for a long, silent moment. “Potter, he’s already here.”

3,083 7
16 Dream State

Ron shouted. “Are you Gryffindors or not! From the looks of you I’d say you were rotten Slytherins hiding under your bed!  How many will stand and fight!?”

2,247 7
17 Into the Depths

A large window high above them suddenly came crashing down, and they shielded their heads. A few pieces of glass caught Harry’s arm and tore through his sleeve into his flesh. He cursed, and said. “I wish there was no magic!”

2,518 8
18 A Battle of Minds

“Sileo in pacis filius obscurum,” Snape said quietly. Harry shivered. “What was that?”
“When a wizard dies,” Snape said quietly, “it is tradition to offer a final spell to guide their entrance to whatever afterlife they seek. “No,” Harry said, “About the prophecy… he said, he never thought you’d betray him after you told him of the prophecy. What prophecy?”

4,769 5
19 Snape's Secret

“You will die!” Lucius screamed. Harry didn’t turn.  “Not before you do, and not today.”

2,167 6
20 Firmer Foundations

“Severus, can you see darkness?”  Frowning, he looked up at the Headmaster. What kind of question was that? “Of course I can see the dark… who can’t?”  Dumbledore shook his head. “Once a room is dark, can it grow any darker?”  “No.”  “Why?” Dumbledore seemed to fall into Professor mode, and it annoyed Severus. He did not feel in the mood to be taught anything at the moment.

3,581 9
21 Father of Mine

Final Chapter!

3,357 19

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