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Rating
15+
Chapters
11
Words
27,257
Characters
Draco, Harry, Dumbledore, Hermione, OC, Ron
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Romance
Era
Advisory
Mild Language
Story Reviews
7
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2005-03-28 2:59am
Last Chapter
2005-12-11 6:18pm
Last Updated
2006-01-27 9:46pm

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1 Chapter one: introduction

Two new girls and their families move from New York to London, and begin Hogwarts in their sixth year. Image hosting by Photobucket

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2 Chapter two: Train ride to Hogwarts

The two new girls, Tia and Victoria socialize with different groups of people from Hogwarts. “Music is the second most important thing to a person’s sanity. Hands down.” “What’s first?” Harry asked. “I’d say, for me, talking to someone. I talk Tia about anything.” Harry nodded.

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3 Chapter three: sorting and secrets

“Well, at the end it goes ‘Since both of you’re parents were Gryffindors, it only makes sense that I put you in…’ and then it announced I was in Gryffindor.” “Both of you’re parents were in Gryffindor then?” “Yeah, we knew that.” Tia said. “Well here’s something we didn’t know-my dad was a Slytherin.” Victoria said.

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4 Chapter four: First day of classes

The students of Hogwarts attend their first day of classes. “I assume you know what this is about, Ms. Hirsch. You’re special power.” Victoria nodded. “It’s very commendable that you can do this at such a young age. I guess you know why you’re parents would have wanted you to master this…”

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5 Chapter five: Can I change your mind

Victoria spends more time with Harry...followed by more time with Ron. “Are you the only one in here right now?” She asked. “Yeah.” He replied. “Alright, well, one thing is, I’m sorry if you’re at all embarrassed about what happened this morning and I do like you but…Well, I brought a CD and I thought we could just chill and listen to it. Sorry for my use of the word ‘chill’ I realize that it is very 90’s and I will try to refrain from using it in the future.” *please read&review

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6 Chapter Six: Hosmeade

The students of Hogwarts go to Hogsmeade. Victoria and Ron grow closer, but so do Harry and Victoria. As they began walking again, Harry slipped his hand around Victoria’s. He looked at her shyly, causing Victoria to giggle and throw her arms around Harry in a hug. “You’re too adorable.” She said, still giggling. They continued to walk hand in hand. *Please read and Review

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7 Chapter Seven: Quidditch and Frustrations

Victoria and Tia try out for the Quidditch team, Ron realized his feelings for Victoria, and you see a lot more of Tia's personality. “Are you like mad at me now just because I said that I think that Blaise and Draco are good looking?” “Well kind of!” Ron said. “It’s not fair that girls like you who have everything are just going to look past guys like me who aren’t gorgeous or have lots of money and that no matter how right I might be for some girl she’s not going to care because I’m no Harry Potter. I’m just Harry’s best friend who’ll never come close to him and it’s not fair!”

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8 Chapter eight: Because I'm Mr. Brightside

Harry wants to be more serious with Victoria, how will this effect Ron? “I love you.” Harry said to Victoria. She was stunned. She didn’t know what to say. “You don’t have to say it back.” Harry said. “Harry, you don’t love me.” She said. “I do love you. You’ve given me this un explainable happiness and I didn’t know what it was but I think it’s love.” “Harry, you’re sixteen. You can’t possibly contemplate what love is..."

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9 Chapter nine: Answered Questions means disaster

Victoria finds out a lot about her parents. Victoria wants to help them, which puts her in a very compromising position.

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10 Chapter ten: Romance and opinions

Harry plans something romantic, Ron tells Victoria how he feels, and Victoria and Tia are at ends over boyfriends.

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11 Chapter 11: "It's Over"

“He was just looking at you rather romantically. Tell me, Vic, is Harry taking you to the ball?” “Err…” “Because he’s told me of how you won’t give him an answer.” “Who’re you taking, then?” She asked. “You’re trying to change the subject.” Ron said. There was a pause of about a minute, in which Ron and Victoria glared at each other. “Hermione. I’m taking Hermione.” “As friends?” Victoria asked snidely, as though implying that Ron would only be able to get a date if they went ‘as friends.’ Quidditch can bring out the worst in people....

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