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## Breakdown by Blackhearted

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by Blackhearted

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Rating
Mature
Chapters
28
Words
40,115
Characters
Dumbledore, Lupin, Snape, Sirius, Lily, James, Lucius, Pettigrew, Voldemort, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Fluff, General, Action/Adventure
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Strong Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse
Story Reviews
4
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2005-06-22 2:11pm
Last Chapter
2005-11-25 11:32am
Last Updated
2005-11-25 11:32am

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Ch. # | Chapter Title | Word Count | Reviews
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1 | Away I look for the rainbow when Im deep in the storm. The weight on my shoulders will get lighter; I will make it through because Im a fighter. Even on the blackest days I'll be fine because clouds part the sun will shine So when I feel under the weather & don’t want to try I remember I have what it takes to fly | 1,432 | 1
2 | Ordinary man first full moon of the year, and it isnt an easy one. | 1,746 | 1
3 | The Real Story its a bit long, but i couldnt stop writing its all essential.! Flashes of greenlight, shrill screaming , a baby crying. You calling for Remus. Choking on your own words. A dark lifeless cell. Cold, dead,alone. "Its a crime, you let this happen to me. How could you?" | 3,047 | 0
4 | Firefly its time to break it to everyone | 746 | 0
5 | One of a Kind You and Sirius walk.. this gott a little mixed up, sorry it somehow get deleted! | 665 | 0
6 | Sweet Dreams are made of these While Sirius and Chelsea were outside talking, James Lily and Remus had a conversation of their own. | 1,248 | 0
7 | Natural Life Natural life your born , you die ,the Natural life your wrong your right, | 1,246 | 0
8 | Fear Sirius totally overreacted! You were just talking to an old friend. But how can you be so sure. And what will you do about it? | 928 | 0
9 | Changes James and Lily cleaned up the mess you created. Then go out to find you, they know how dangerous you are in this state, especially since you put about 30 people in the hospital wing at one time.What they will find, will forever be etched in their minds. | 904 | 0
10 | Tell me crazy emotional outbreaks,wandless furious fighting, and now you have to talk about your step father. Things are not always what they seem. But nothing stays on the surface. | 1,697 | 0
11 | Just a Taste You were mentally exhasuted, weak and completely burnt out. You felt so driven down so far as being completely overcome by it. feeling no other way out, trapped, stranded, and totally alone. | 823 | 0
12 | Forfiet Your faces inched together, untill his lips met yours, making your entire body tingle and become hott with wanting, with passion. You could feel his hand wrap around your waist, pulling you closer to him. Bringing your bodies together, with no space inbetween. | 1,259 | 0
13 | Switch After your amazing start of the day, things get rockier and rockier by the second. | 982 | 0
14 | Break My Fall Voldemort approached Mr&Mrs Pettigrew, picked up one of his cloaked followers, and tore off his hood revealing their eldest son, Peters older brother, David. And left. Unable to accept that their son turned to the darkside and that they just killed him. They killed themselves. Leaving Peter witness to it all. | 2,129 | 0
15 | Phony Closure On James's left laid Sirius, in the worst shape you had ever seen him. your eyes began to burn with tears, your head started to pound. Sharp piercing pains shot from the pit of your stomach to your heart, causing you to lose your breath, making you dizzy. | 2,235 | 0
16 | SoulFire Besides being able to see in Lilys eyes, >how much she loved him, Lily had confided in him many years ago, >about many many things. Remus knew all about Lily's fears, all about >her wants, her likes and dislikes. | 1,381 | 0
17 | Uninvited The door opened lal the way and the best friend you have ever had walkd in. her face was peaceful, her eyes bloodshot. She smiled at you as she walked closer and closer to your four poster. You just stood there in front of your friend, looking right into her eyes. She only a foot away was a reflection of your actions. The next second you had eachother in a tight loving hug. Words were unnecessary, all that would have been needed to talk about was said through your embrace. All became clear and completely understood. | 1,580 | 2
18 | Falling In All happening in an instant you quickly looked away from the scene, not wanting to catch anyones eye. You turned you head back to Dan, you saw Lily looking at you, with the same expression as Remus, execept she had a bit of what looked like nervous aprehension | 1,507 | 0
19 | Next to Nothing Its the last thing I want to do , but the first thing I have to do!" The Marauders became still and quite, all knowing that..there was no way around it. | 1,845 | 0
20 | Count the days You dropped your head on the table and breathed heavily ignoring the hunger pains screaming from your stomach. You lifted your head and watched at the elves slowly winding down from a hard days work. You saw Alleigh running around getting you what you needed. | 1,538 | 0
21 | Medicate You slumped down remembering that night. You missed it, missed those days. The pranking, the craziness, the complete disregard for most authority and always having no limits. As long as it made for a good laugh, it was well worth it no matter how much detention we could ever get. | 1,468 | 0
22 | Perfect You reached the Great Hall to find it quater the way full. You scanned the tables and saw at the one at the far right Remus and Sirius siting there in a thoughtful converstion. Seeing him out of the Hospital Wing didnt surprise you. You knew how he was there, and it made you feel good the he looked so much better. You sat Across Remus and bid good morning to the both of them. But all you got in return was stares. | 1,507 | 0
23 | Dread Things were getting to much to handle in the Great Hall so you and Dan walked out to the Quiditch Pitch..where more then just an escape from Sirius escaped your lips. | 1,311 | 0
24 | Unspeakable While you were outside with Dan, Lily and the Marauders were in the Great Hall having their own conversation. | 1,522 | 0
25 | Miles The dance was going great, untill you went outside. | 1,144 | 0
26 | Rolling thunder Tomorrow's still a miracle .............hiding all emotion far away | 1,005 | 0
27 | Disconnect I feel this, this tension inside of me Pressure is presently pushing down on me The first time it starts with just you and I Repeating myself but you don't hear me I can see what you see But is it worth it to me? The same old conversation Over and over and over | 1,682 | 0
28 | Rescue me How could we have known? Carefull Im dritfing off losing taste and touch. This Bodys left the soul. | 1,538 | 0

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