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Rating
Mature
Chapters
21
Words
97,324
Characters
Draco, Ginny, Harry, Cho, Dumbledore, Hermione, Neville, OC, Ron, Sirius Black, Snape, M. McGonagall
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Romance, Action, Humor, General, AU
Era
Advisory
Strong Language, Strong Violence
Story Reviews
31
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2003-07-27 12:00am
Last Chapter
2005-11-22 12:03pm
Last Updated
2005-11-22 12:04pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Chapter One - Enter: One Hero

An American student, 16 years old, comes to Hogwarts. The problem? He's just starting. This student introduces the school to the concept of total war. Connections to OotP. Back again after another six months. The second-to-last chapter has been completed, and is ready for viewing.

4,906 20
2 Chapter Two - First Steps

Jon, our intrepid hero, arrives in jolly old England, displaying some of his unusual talents. His first steps into the world of wizardry are unhesitant, and before we know it he's right at home.

1,635 0
3 Chapter Three - Magic: Learning to Start Beginning

Magical shopping for fun and over-expenditure. We learn Jon's last name (which I still don't like) and our hero displays his perpetuity.

4,001 1
4 Chapter Four - Even Better Then Amtrak

Ah, train rides. Perfect opportunities to meet new people and get a little sleep. I show off my ability to look up underground routings on the internet. Whoo!

2,667 1
5 Chapter Five - Sort, Eat, Wander, Teach

The first steps onto Hogwart's hallowed grounds. Hallowed... yeah, right. Anyway, our hero gets his first taste of school life, and appears to like it. This chapter has waaaaay too much copied from the fifth book.

5,528 1
6 Chapter Six - Education: Sucks, Doesn't It?

Jon returns to an ordered system of learning. And is fairly unsurprised by it. The bastard.

5,439 0
7 Chapter Seven- Ad Hoc Theatre, Teachers, and Discipline, Oh My!

A taste of theater, Jon Paine style. Jon meets Professor Umbridge, and, again, waaaaaay too much is copied from the fifth book.

6,765 0
8 Chapter Eight - A Tale, A Lesson, and A Trick

Jon shows off, that smarmy bugger. And, of course, he talks politics and manipulation.

5,318 0
9 Chapter Nine - Training, Sleep, and an Interruption

Jon gets his teach on. Then his massacre on. It all balances out in the end. Sort of.

3,693 0
10 Chapter Ten - Assassins, Salvation, and Death: An End?

Death and resurrection. Without the resurrection, though. Jon kills people, shows off, and saves a life or five. This was actually one point at which I considered ending the story, but I decided against it. Good idea? Bad idea? YOU MAKE THE CALL!

4,831 0
11 Chapter Eleven - Noises, Speeches, and Democracy: Ain't It Grand?

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4,051 0
12 Chapter Twelve- Confrontation, Sleep, and Chemistry

Jon sleeps with a pair of beautiful young girls, yells at Dumbledore, and gets a reward for, apparently, getting shot. Hey, it's England.

4,062 0
13 Chapter Thirteen - Even Better Then Semtex

Lunch, an explosion, and some wrestling, plus a request and some magic. Love... is in the air....

4,737 0
14 Chapter Fourteen - Praefecture, Potion, and A First Class

Disagreement, magic, potions class, and Jon's First Class. Aren't I proud of him? Yes I am!

5,223 0
15 Chapter Fifteen - A Speech, Some KO's, and a Note

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4,802 1
16 Chapter Sixteen - Battle Training, A Duel, and a Conversation

Jon shows off (AGAIN!), does even more teaching, and takes a challenge. A little more of the mysterious lad's past comes to light.

5,302 1
17 Chapter Seventeen - Teaching, Talking, and Sleep

Jon does some good teaching, shoots a hole in the wall, and shows off a bit more. Plus, a conversation. Unusually enough.

4,813 2
18 Chapter Eighteen - Love and Memories

A detailed look into our hero's past. Love, pain, and death are our primary themes, backed by hope and depression.

6,828 0
19 Chapter Nineteen - Lessons

Jon is a savage. Figuratively speaking. Anyway, Jon does some teaching, some talking, some shouting, and even a bit of romance. *Important note on upcoming update added. Perusal recommended.*

6,999 0
20 Chapter Twenty - Wherein Our Hero Does Make War

Following naturally from the last chapter, Jon sensibly leaps about a bit in the night, then kills a bunch of things and gets some well-deserved rest.

4,618 3
21 Chapter Unknown - Distant Future

The second-to-last chapter of the series. Included: A brief summary of events between the last chapter and this one.

1,106 1

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