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Rating
Mature
Chapters
12
Words
20,571
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, Pettigrew, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, OC/OC, Sirius/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance, Angst
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
18
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-01-08 7:07pm
Last Chapter
2008-07-02 10:11pm
Last Updated
2008-07-02 10:11pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Miss.Black-clad,Snake friendly,Cool and Collective

Her eyes boar into mine I felt as if my insides were slowly freezing. Her eyes were steel grey tinged with light icy blue. They looked like two chips of ice. I needed to look away. I couldn’t move I was paralyzed and felt helpless. I started hyperventilating my breaths coming in gasps. I saw the snake move once again to whisper in her ear. She broke her eye contact with me and immediately I felt better.

1,144 4
2 Sabriel...a Seer?!

She was lying flat on her stomach intently reading a book one hand griping the book the other holding a lollipop, every once in a while she absent-mindedly would suck on it and flip the page totally oblivious to the fact that I was staring at her...

1,343 3
3 I am NOT a monster!

“Hey! I’m not a monster! This is something normal in the magic world! Look you’re a seer I’m a metamorphosis…see? We’re both different yet the same we’re still humans you know!” I yell irritably. 
She stops mid wail and looks blankly at me her eyes wide with panic. 
“Who told you that I was a seer?!” She demands whisper-yelling.
I sigh.
I've got some explaining to do...

591 1
4 Stubbornness + Abusive, Proud Crows = Something Lethal

 Okay fine she could stay in this compartment, speak Parsletounge with her freak snake shamelessly, but open the window when it was freezing cold? That’s pushing it. I absolutely hate the cold, wet, whatever. It sucks. Miss. EBCSFCC ignores me instead she sticks her arm out the window, just holds it out there. I can feel my face get heated annoyance wiped all over my face. Andromeda starts to hiss at Miss. EBCSFCC in an amused tone. Okay fine...I’m cool with the whole window thing because Andromeda just freaked me out there, but ignoring me? That's a bit of a stretch.

1,352 2
5 Entering TROUBLE...

And so on went my miserable train ride with Sabriel following me trying to be friends Erica following her and add Lily to the mix. The perfect threesome…and threesome they will stay, I did not want to be part of there little groupie and never planned to be.

1,791 1
6 Accidental Magic

“If you mean your rudeness then you aren’t excuse, not at all!” I hissed I felt my hands ball into fists.
“Miss. Danforth! I shall temporarily ignore your rudeness and I shall warn you to please control yourself and restrain from any accidental magic!”
Too late.

1,232 1
7 Roomies...

         I bolt up to see Lily on the floor laughing hysterically and Sabriel on top of her laughing her wind chime laugh. Erica she just stood over them amused she slowly stepped over them and choose her bed first while they were distracted, (clever girl) she choose the bed nearest to the window and let Orion out. My eyes narrowed as I watched the crow (Yes, crow) fly away.

1,288 2
8 Morning ChitChat

          I shrug letting it go. There was silence after this, not an awkward one but a peaceful friendly one. I waited getting slightly impatient; whatever he wanted to talk about must be important.

1,569 1
9 Show those Pearly Whites!

“There won’t be a next time!” I shout back, but even as I said this another smile appeared on my face. I bow my head so no one could see and go berserk like Lily and Sabriel did.

2,272 1
10 Forever and Always

He takes my hand firmly and looks at me with his grey eyes seriously.
“You can always come to me, Laur always.”
“Really?”
“Uh huh, forever and always, I promise.”
He sticks out his pinky finger and I wind it with my own. Then we stamp it with our thumbs. I give him a little smile happily.
“Forever and always.” I repeat.
As if.

1,711 1
11 Who Are You?

I fiercely wipe away tears rolling down my cheeks.
“The girl went to the boy to console this with him. But all he did was get angry at her for interrupting him when he was with his new best friends. He didn’t notice she was crying. He didn’t even notice the bruise on her face. That’s when the girl realized that to him she was just a joke. That’s when she decided she had enough and made real friends with the girls who first came to her, like she should have from the beginning.”

3,546 1
12 Everything

“Witch,” he calls me then turning away. He starts walking when I feel another strange emotion I never felt before. It’s like a raging fire and is now out of control. A consuming wild fire...still on the ground I glare at his back. My blood feels like it’s bubbling and boiling and I’m filled with such hate for the boy.

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