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Rating
15+
Chapters
4
Words
14,728
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Remus/OC
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Sirius/OC
Genre(s)
Romance, Action/Adventure, Young Adult
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
17
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-04-04 4:15pm
Last Chapter
2007-08-21 5:54pm
Last Updated
2007-08-21 5:54pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 I Miss You

I stood on a muddy hill, letting the wet dirt sift through my shaking fingertips. Tears were freely strolling down my rosy cheeks in the muggy weather of late August. The rain pattered down upon the hood of the black cloak I was wearing over my black skirt and blouse. Just then, I started to feel the wetness seeping through my cloak, onto my skin beneath it. I didn't even care. 

I had just lost my best friend, and I wasn't sure if I would ever recover from the loss.

2,442 6
2 Way Away

"Aunt Lisa, where's the train?" my brother questioned.

"In there," she pointed to the brick wall between 9 and 10.

"You're kidding," I said, shocked.

"No, just watch," she said.

A boy, who had messy jet black hair, light brown eyes, and glasses, ran through, pushing his trolley ahead of him, and then disappeared through the wall.

3,749 4
3 The River

"Erica Miller, and this is my brother Jason. He's a first year," I said, turning as I referred to my brother.

James sat across from us, pulling my brother hair that was sticking up and making little pigtails and braids randomly with small rubber bands that he was pulling out of his pocket. Why on Earth was he carrying around rubber bands?

"James!" the girl screeched at him.

"Lily," he replied, as if playing with another boy's hair was a daily activity for him.

3,891 4
4 Too Much to Ask

I was led to the dungeons by Sirius, who insisted that I watch him trip a greasy haired, hook-nosed boy, Severus Snape.

Just as Sirius tripped him, Severus fell to the floor, all his items scattering, some smashing, while James and Sirius just laughed. Lily stood in the back, disapproving, but not stepping up, while Remus wasn't anywhere to be seen, as well as Peter.

I gasped at what Sirius had just done. Did he think he impressed me by doing this?

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