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Rating
15+
Chapters
20
Words
28,306
Characters
Sirius, James
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance, Angst
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
53
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-04-28 7:58pm
Last Chapter
2007-07-26 10:42pm
Last Updated
2008-01-04 5:49pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 To Feel the Breath Catch in Your Throat

Present Time/Prologue type thing. Just read it, you'll understand.

"The strangling sensation was a minute detail, but the burning in my lungs, the simple fact that I could not inhale because I was beguiled by you, was what made it so unbearable."

1,211 5
2 Another Heart, Another Mind

Flashback

"Back in second year, you and I made a promise. That once we were old enough, we would move into our own flat together."

1,170 4
3 Eye for an Eye

Present Time

"It brings unfamiliar, sadistic pleasure to watch you stammering helplessly and my lips twinge involuntarily, begging to stretch my drooping face with a smirk."

1,114 2
4 Monotony

Flashback

"We both gaze around, impressed by the small space, and simultaneously thinking how we can change everything about it with the flick of a wand should we please."

1,422 3
5 Chicanery

Present Time

"Your guiltless deceit and non-existent conscience might almost warrant you an expert at the skillful art of chicanery."

1,284 2
6 Lunchtime Rendezvous

Flashback

"After a few moments of silent reluctance, you finally conclude that maybe getting out for a while won't be so bad."

1,162 3
7 Salt Water Taffy

Present Time

"It’s astonishing that something as trivial as a brightly colored piece of candy can send one over the edge so quickly."

1,313 3
8 Maladroit

Flashback

"An awkward silence falls over the table and we are left staring at each other uncomfortably. I don’t like this. Small talk, polite conversation. What happened to the two of us?"

1,414 2
9 Hostile

Present Time

"My thoughts are clouded by my extreme loathing for you, so honestly, every insane idea floating around in there sounds good at the moment."

1,305 4
10 A Black Epistle

Flashback

"Suddenly you enter the room, a piece of crisp parchment clutched tightly in your hand. Your face is pale and your brow is furrowed."

1,339 0
11 Tea for Three

Present Time

"With another swift movement, the kettle lifts from the stove and sloppily pours three cups of tea. It appears to be reflecting Remus’ emotions as violent twitches cause steaming hot water to slosh over the tip of the mugs onto the countertop and floor."

1,230 2
12 The Black Walburga

Flashback

"Christened the 'Black Walburga' based on her unnaturally cruel and spider-like predatory nature, Walburga Black is by far the most venomous woman I have ever met."

1,281 1
13 Eschewal

Present Time

"You stumble backward in horror and I can barely contain a laugh, seeing how ridiculous you look. Your eyes are wide with shock and you appear to be gaping, but due to the dislocation of your jaw, it seems to have shifted significantly to the left."

1,309 2
14 Lazy Marianne is Sick... Again

Flashback

"Clearly annoyed, she attempts to calmly explain to 'Cecile' that she is not a doctor and has no idea how to deal with ingrown toenails."

1,645 3
15 Marvelous

Present Time

“Me?” I shout. “I’m marvelous! Couldn’t be better, really. What about you Moony? Padfoot? Aren’t we all just… marvelous?” I finish bitterly, downing another shot.

1,404 2
16 To Be Needed

Flashback

"It feels nice to be needed."

1,672 2
17 An Inebriated Rodent

Present Time

“You weren’t… entirely wrong in thinking that I was a victim of the Dark Lord,” he begins nervously. We all look at him intently, barely breathing as we wait for him to continue.

1,847 4
18 Cerebral Suicide

Flashback

"The rest of the time, I simply cannot understand anything about her, and I believe it would be cerebral suicide to attempt to."

1,553 4
19 Ends of the Spectrum

Present Time

"I’m losing you. Right now. This is the moment. You are dying right in front of me and it seems there is nothing I can do to stop it."

1,615 2
20 Computaters and Other Crazy Muggle Contraptions

Flashback

"The overwhelming suspicion seems to be spreading freely from my head to my heart, leaving all veins of transportation boiling with feverish jealously."

2,016 3

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