Rewritten
James and Lily's sixth year comes to a close with quite a bang.
“You know, you’re very lucky I’m stuck in a step right now, otherwise that would have resulted in a slap.”

Rewritten
“Yeah” she said in a far away breathy voice still in awe of this magnificent house.
Lily moves house rather suddenly.

“If he messes up tonight and Lily ends up killing him, end of problem!”
Lily and her family and friends attend the dinner party next door.

The summer ends for the Marauders and Lily and they return back to Hogwarts for their final year.
"Don't worry Mum," Lily said putting her arm around her in a hug like she used to when she was little. "I'm fine, they are looking out for me more than most people Mum, don't worry."

“You can’t pretend any more Lily. I’ve seen it, you don’t have to be like this.”As the second week of school begins, Lily can't help but notice James' coldness.

“Now, I know that in the past you to have had your differences, but for this I want you to put them aside and just try and set a good example, ok?” Lily had a sneaking feeling that Professor McGonagall was talking more to her than James.A task away from normal ciriculum shakes things up a little.