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Rating
15+
Chapters
6
Words
12,846
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
James/Lily
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/OC, Sirius/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance, Angst
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
17
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-07-05 6:22am
Last Chapter
2007-07-15 11:18am
Last Updated
2007-07-15 11:18am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 One

As the rain began to slow slightly, Lily looked up to see who had offered to help her. He was already lifting her trunk onto the trolley with the help of another person. Lily was pretty sure he could have managed it himself though, as his shoulders were rather broad. She instantly regretted her thoughts.

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2 Two

Lily nodded, although she was pretty sure that if her sister had awoken and realised where she was, the screaming was probably more to do with being scared. Her sister had always tolerated the fact her she was different but as she grew older, she had become less so, to the extent that she feared even the slightest crackle from Lily’s wand.

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3 Three

Lily was cut short. ‘I don’t want to talk about them!’ Petunia snapped, her fingers twisting around her neck nervously.

Lily did but she nodded regardless. ‘Maybe we should go to Grandmas?’

Petunia’s eyes slit. ‘Are you mad?’

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4 Four

After a few moments, Sirius spoke. ‘Can you see it too?’ he asked her.

Lily looked across at him curiously. ‘See what?’

‘The little flecks of light.’

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5 Five

Lily decided to ignore the awkwardness that Sirius had created between the two of them. He was laughing happily to himself but James was scowling, slightly mortified by the comment. Lily realised that it would be up to her to break the tension between them because James was looking as though he was about to die.

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6 Six

Remus grinned at the arrival of his friend but it was James who spoke, ‘what have you done to poor Lily, Padfoot?’ he asked playfully and Lily remembered the odd names they had used to refer to themselves as, ‘she’s practically turned into a red balloon!’

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