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Rating
Mature
Chapters
19
Words
60,870
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, A. Longbottom, F. Longbottom, Lily, James, Regulus, Bellatrix, Pettigrew, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
Remus/OC
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, James/OC, Lily/OC, Sirius/OC
Genre(s)
Horror/Dark, Humor, Romance
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Strong Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
112
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2008-03-05 8:16pm
Last Chapter
2012-08-01 1:04am
Last Updated
2012-08-01 1:04am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Hi, I’m Raven Elliot

This sums up who Raven is etc, and then it goes into the Hogwarts train.

excerpt below. 

”So, seventh year eh Elliot!” Sirius said wiggling his eyebrows.

”Ya?” I said, not even caring that they cared enough to stay.

”Which means, we have only one year to find out.” Remus cut in.

”And what is it that you possibly need to find out?” I said, knowing full well what they were talking about.

”Your secret!” James said proudly.

2,746 16
2 Nightmares and Howlers.

I picked up this black book, I opened it and my heart got caught in my throat there in the center of the page was a shaded version of the full moon. It was labeled “Dancing In The Moonlight.” I felt like crying, this picture was beautiful.

2,372 6
3 Who is that Girl?

”SIRIUS BLACK!” Lily squealed!

”The one and only baby! You know Lily, we could always hook up some time, and we just won’t tell Prongs.”

”Take me now Sirius!” Lily moaned.

1,922 4
4 No Air


”And who is your friend Lily?” Sirius asked eyeing me up and down.

”That would be Raven ” Lily said laughing.

”ELLIOT?” Sirius spluttered.

”The one and only.” I replied coolly.

3,336 4
5 In the Shadow of the Moon

”No? Okay how about you Miss. Elliot? Since you thought it was okay to be late for my class how about you go give this a whirl? Since you think it is okay to skip class. Everyone make room, this is going to be a show.” Edwin sneered.

2,979 9
6 Keep Breathing

I felt something wet slopping against my forehead, it made me smile. The relaxing rhythm worked the impulsive headache away from my mind. I felt my body relax and it now hit me that I might be able to open my eyelids.

3,633 5
7 Afraid of Living

”That’s up to you then, you have no idea what you just got yourself into. What if after a while you realize I’m not that great, too messed up. I don’t think I could handle loosing you.”

3,326 7
8 Love Story


See you insignificant girl, you are nothing in this world. Such a shame that mudblood stopped you from killing yourself in the first year. The world would be way better off without you, scum.’ Alexandra’s voice cut through my thoughts and I looked away from Remus’s glance ashamed.

2,279 4
9 Stupid Eyes

Growing bored of our ink war we decided to go for a staring contest. I thought I was winning, when everything went black and I wasn’t in the classroom anymore, I was in a prison looking cell and a second later I was back in the classroom with a horrified looking Lily staring at me.

2,884 3
10 I See What They See

I sprinted to the unused washroom and slammed the door behind me. I let out a sigh of relief and slid down to the ground.

2,390 5
11 Shake It!

Raven would die, Lily would dump James and her and Snape would elope, Dumbledore would come out of the closet and I would've killed of Peter.... the last one sounds okay, because NO ONE likes Peter but without him.. there would be no boy who lived... so YEAH!

3,046 4
12 Crash and Burn

”Do you Raven Elliot swear to never do that again?” James asked.

”Do you James Potter realize how big of a jerk face you are?” I asked back, twisting in my ropes.

3,549 10
13 War of the Tongues

To say I was nervous was an understatement. My hands were shaking as I tried to eat my cereal. Today was the big day, the game against Slytherin, and I knew it was going to be nasty.

3,189 6
14 He said, She said

I chuckle as I imagine myself as a half man half lion when I hear giggling around the corner. Smirking I start sneaking to catch and embarrass who ever is getting freaky.

2,751 5
15 Dance, Baby, Dance

"To get back to our old ways. When I talked backed to you and you yelled at me. Back to when we would fight for nothing but in the end still love each other. When nothing could keep us apart. We could fix this, I know how we can, and you know."

3,420 5
16 Just So You Know

"I never said you were stupid. But I heard the plans that wait for you if you do, and, well, let's just say they aren't pretty. So just don't leave Hogwarts and you'll be fine. For now that is." Regulas said.

3,378 4
17 It's Startng To Look Like Christmas or Not

Read and Reviw :)

7,302 10
18 No Words Could Be Spoken

Let them come, I’ve given up.

2,219 2
19 The Secrets in Life, Are Found in the Bacon

 I am back in the damp cellar, oh why did I decide to sleep? I can`t remember exactly what happened down here but a girl can put two and two together. I look up to find my hands chained and I started to breathe faster. Faster and faster until I start to scream.

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