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Rating
12+
Chapters
9
Words
8,941
Characters
Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, OC/OC, Remus/OC, Sirius/OC, Other Pairing
Genre(s)
General, Romance, Young Adult
Era
Marauders
Advisory
No Warnings
Story Reviews
7
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2008-03-10 2:11am
Last Chapter
2008-10-05 8:51am
Last Updated
2008-10-05 8:51am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 The Hogwarts Express

Sybill Potter, on the hogwarts express, meets a group of people that James would have prefered she didn't know... his friends 

1,429 1
2 The Sorting

A/N: thanks to all the wonderful people who haveread my first chapter, I know it's kind of silly to ask you to review but I just want to know whether the way I write is ok and also if the idea (in full story summary) is worth writing about.

Summary: This chapter is about Sybill's sorting. (don't kill me about the sorting hat's song it took me about twenty minutes to write!)

1,002 1
3 Meeting Lily

Sybill gets to know Sirius and Lily

627 1
4 The Start of a New Year

This Chapter is a fill in chapter inbetween Chapter Three - meeting lily, and chapter 5 - where the story really begins, with... dance lesson and old friends?

888 2
5 Admiration?

The start of dancing lessons, and some old friends

1,404 1
6 Private Tuition

I ONLY OWN SYB AND MEAGAN AND THE DANCE TEACHERS, NO-ONE ELSE (AS OF YET, THERE COULD BE MORE CHARACTERS BY ME COMING) BUT SO FAR I ONLY OWN SYB, MEAGAN AND THE PLOT

1,164 0
7 The Room of Requirement and Jealousy

Remus shows Sybill the Room of Requirement and starts to feel jealous

779 0
8 Jealousy and feelings reveal themselves to their owners

In this chapter, Sybill and Remus start to realise their feelings for other people, but are they for each other?

1,142 0
9 Talking

Sybill and Steven talk.

506 1

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