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Rating
15+
Chapters
8
Words
21,419
Characters
Lupin, Snape, Sirius, A. Longbottom, F. Longbottom, Lily, James, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Snape/Lily, James/OC, Remus/OC, Sirius/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Strong Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
5
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2008-10-16 4:47pm
Last Chapter
2009-07-11 6:06pm
Last Updated
2009-07-11 6:06pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Leaving Home

Lily had just gotten her trunk to the bottom of the stairs, and was putting on her white coat, when a loud voice came from the living room. “NO. NO NO NO! Mother I am not going to go and see off that freak. I think it’s a good thing that she’ll be gone. Anyway, I had planned on meeting Vernon, this afternoon, and I’m not going to allow the freak to ruin my plans.”


Lily just nodded.
I know, she thought. It had always been like that.

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2 Platform 9 3/4

James smiled. “I think I’m getting somewhere,” he said happily to his two friends, Remus Lupin and Sirius Black. His other friend, Peter Pettigrew was nowhere to be found. 

“Yeah, on the road to nowhere,” Sirius commented.

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3 The Train Ride: Part 1

“Hey, Evans. Are you Head Girl?” James Potter turned around and grinned at the four girls, Lily especially.

“What’s it to you?” she retorted.

“Well, you see,” he said, in a voice as smooth as silk, “I happen to be Head Boy, and it would be nice to know who I’m working with."

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4 The Train Ride: Part 2

            “Wait a second,” Long interrupts. “Did you just say that Lily had a quiet discussion with Potter? No yelling or screaming?”
            I just nodded. Wasn’t that the truth?
            “Damn it,” she whispers. “The world is really coming to an end.”

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5 First Night


“Excellent,” Padfoot whispers.
I whip my head around. “Padfoot, what exactly are you planning?” I ask.
“You don’t want to know,” Moony answers.
“Yeah.” Wormtail agrees.
“I wouldn’t ask, James,” Frank says.
“Why is it that everyone knows about this but me?” I say angrily.
“Well,” Padfoot finally answers, “You’re Head Boy, and we didn’t want you ratting us out,”

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6 First Day: Part One

“What makes you think I care?”

“James likes you. A lot. And he’s worth it. I don’t know what planet you live on, but I really don’t think it is a good idea for you to talk to him the way you do. You really hurt his feelings. And next time you see him, I hope you apologize.”

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7 First Day: Part Two

CRUNCH

Lily screamed.
“Damn it, Evans, you bloody fell on top of me. Who knew a thirteen-year-old could weigh so much!” Potter shouted.
“That’s rich, coming from you, Potter! I think you bloody broke my arm.”

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8 Worry

“I...Miss Evans, that was quite an impressive speech. However, the matter is still that you broke a rule, and the punishment—”

“What rule did we break?” I had never heard Lily interrupt a teacher or talk back to one before. Damn. She was hotter than I thought.

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