Hello,
I'm just really intersted in Lily and James's relationship, especially as it's left somewhat of a mystery in the books, so I decided to explore it from the very beginning.  Admittedly, I don't spend a lot of time in the beginning, but the first five chapters are set during their first year at Hogwarts.  This is just the intro chapter, so please, read and review.  I love both praise and constructive criticism.