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Rating
Mature
Chapters
4
Words
10,453
Characters
Lupin, Snape, Sirius, A. Longbottom, Lily, James, Pettigrew
Primary Relationship
Sirius/OC
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Lily/OC, Remus/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance, Young Adult
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Strong Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
24
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2010-04-06 11:24am
Last Chapter
2010-10-05 8:50am
Last Updated
2010-10-05 8:50am

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1 Chapter one: the mysterious packet


It was the holidays after Easter of 1982. The girls of the school were arriving with ominously protruding bellies as they had gorged themselves on the sugary delights that tempted them and danced before their greedy, petulant little eyes. Who could honestly blame them? Being stuck with their snotty, well to-do families for a whole two weeks, the agony was unbearable as they were constantly scrutinised from head to toe.

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2 Chapter two: the meeting

“I can do this” I muttered, drawing on the dregs of my courage, billowing my lungs out for one final deep breath in. My heart began to slow its frantic jig. I pulled the door open, my arm seemed to be dis-attached, I didn’t want to go in. But my body was commanding me, pulling me towards the woman who would probably eat my ear off with little hesitation.

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3 Chapter Three: The Kidnappers

"...And then I might push M into a drain for the fun of it.” She was muttering now as the boy still held her as she attempted with an even more feverish attitude and longing to re-enter the pub than I had. He seemed to hold her with ease, ignoring the red handbag....

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4 Chapter four: The swarm

I was currently curled up in the featle position, my knees clasped tightly to my chest as I snuffled and sniffed loudly. I hurriedly pulled my duvet up to my chin, as an owl sung its song of delight outside of my window. I could hear the other girls rolling over, making their beds creak ominously in the oppressive silence.

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