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Rating
Mature
Chapters
8
Words
9,327
Characters
Harry, Ron, Hermione, Lucius, Narcissa, Draco, Ginny, Blaise (M)
Primary Relationship
Draco/Hermione
Secondary Relationship(s)
Harry/Ginny, Ron/Lavender
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
4
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2011-01-25 6:56pm
Last Chapter
2011-03-12 11:21am
Last Updated
2011-03-12 11:21am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 The start of troubling times

When forbidden love cant be denied people start to get hurt
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

582 1
2 Oh babe I love it when you play dirty

Hermione would never had perceived that she would look forward to a detention, but how that joy turns to sadness.
 

1,048 0
3 Smirks

“Tell me you don’t find me attractive…. See you can’t. You know you want me. Its clear” and with a wink, Blaise leant in to kiss Ginny
 
 
 

975 0
4 Unity & Equality

headships announced, along with some home truths
 

1,208 1
5 Wordless Conversations

Rons reaction was too much for harry but what else makes him blackout after the words...Wow today has been too much
 

1,192 0
6 CRUCIO

Cissa intercepts a letter meant for Lucius. what will it say, and why does she lie to him?

 

Please review and let me know how to improve my writing guys :)

 

each review is replied to, and thanks again for reading.

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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7 What a way to meet the folks ey?

thanks for reading :) it means so much to me :)

 

please leave a review whether you liked it or not, and if anyone has got any advice on improving my writing style then it is gladly welcomed!

 

rose x

 

oh and as much as i would like to, i dont own anything but the plot, oh and Jazzle :P the rest belongs to J. K. Rowling  :)
 
 
 

1,714 0
8 Lucius

Sorry its a bit short but the next one is written :)

please review it means alot :)

 

thanks,

 

oneandonlymrsmalfoy

 

x
 

1,030 1

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