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Rating
Mature
Chapters
15
Words
25,169
Characters
Lupin, Snape, Sirius, Lily, OC
Primary Relationship
James/Lily
Secondary Relationship(s)
Snape/Lily, Remus/OC, Snape/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Romance, Action/Adventure
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Strong Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
23
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2011-04-24 3:44pm
Last Chapter
2012-07-24 8:43pm
Last Updated
2012-07-24 8:43pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 First Impressions

“Why don’t you ask him to dance Lily?”
Suggested Dorcas, making no sense to Lily.
“Did you hear what I have just said, Dorcas?”
“Yes, but you know he was right, so in the way for you to start to appreciate him is only your pride”
“Maybe, but I can’t easily forget mine to forgive his”

Revised by bedella// Chapter image: aphrodite@tda

2,743 5
2 Longing

She paced back to her bed, smiling and curling the tips of her hair like James had done, and though she didn’t confess it she longed for those large fingers to touch her hair with the tenderness she had seen. 

Revised by bedella// Chapter image aphrodite@tda

1,951 2
3 Fever

Jane was and sleeping, covered with blankets and looking feverish.
Lily put a hand on her forehead, she was burning hot.“What happened to you?” She asked to Remus. He panted while speaking, worry falling from his words.

Revised by bedella

2,171 2
4 The Kiss

 He opened his eyes and put his hands around Jane’s neck. She smiled again, looking very glad.
And bringing her closer again, Remus kissed her passionately.

Revised by bedella

1,414 1
5 Surprising Severus

 He had begun to let a beard grow, he now hung his hair back in a low ponytail and his thin body and grown to the arms of a man. Before Lily could catch herself she was having the hots for Severus Snape.

Revised by bedella

1,611 4
6 Charleston for Dinner

 Charleston took Lily’s hand and kissed it, never taking his eyes off her.
“My dear girl, what beautiful eyes you have”
“Thank you, Mr. Meadowes” Said Lily with mirth.
“Oh, Charleston please, a man such as myself should forever be in first name terms with such beautiful girls”


Revised by bedella

1,601 1
7 Lily’s Trust

 “Oh-my-god! Lily!” She cried to Lily, reproachfully.
“This time it was different”
“I can’t believe you! Have you forgotten what he did? How much you suffered? How he disappointed you?”
Lily’s eyes filled with tears.
“No”
“Well, apparently you have! Because you are letting go of the past to quickly in order to punish Potter who never did anything to you”

2,084 2
8 According to Snape

 James squeezed her harder again, this time ‘til it hurt. Lily looked into his eyes with hate dripping out of hers.
“He wasn’t stupid enough to tell you!” He hissed.
“Maybe he was, and to tell me how cowardly you were and how he managed to save your life just in time”

1,119 3
9 James' Accusation

 “My father was a great man, but he was old and had lived his life, the question is if the Ministry is still going to let young man’s lives being stolen by a terrorist they have no idea how to fight and who they are afraid simply because the most powerful families in the Wizarding World licks his shoes and provide protection for him not to mention their sons and daughters to fight by his side”

1,389 0
10 The Last Proposal.

“Do you realize that even though you have qualities...aplenty, you are a muggleborn… this maybe the only proposal you could ever gain?”
Lily turned around, but Charleston held her wrist and when she turned back to him, his lips fell on hers. It wasn’t just because he didn’t taste very well or because his lips felt like a wooden surface, Lily had never kissed anybody, she couldn’t believe this was her first kiss.

1,628 0
11 Surrender

James was soft and comforting, not hard and selfish as Charleston. His lips were tender and his touch full of respect, that Lily couldn’t do anything but relax, forgetting hate and years of contempt, completely surrendering to him.
 

794 0
12 Possibilities

“Did he kiss you?”
Affirmative answer.
“What did it feel like?”
Mary thought for a while.
“Like I could spend a whole day kissing him, and not see the sun set behind the lake”
It was like Lily’s mind had shattered on a hard surface. No… this couldn’t be. 

1,354 0
13 Unoticed

 Lily sank in her seat, too concerned with her own feelings to notest Remus biting his lips so fiercely they were bleeding and James looking ferociously at Sirius who looked at Jane like he could rip her neck, while she was still chatting with Fitzwilliam.

2,394 3
14 Lies and the Happiness of Friends

“Oh yeah, what is it that I’ve done exactly?”

Lily babbled, not having found enough accusations.

“You separated them! You’ve spoiled what they had, I cannot fathom the reason why, but believe me I will”

“Believe me, Evans, I wasn’t the one who spoiled them, she was!”

1,258 0
15 Minds & Duels

 "You're not allowed to use dark magic, Pasha"
Pasha smirked.
"At that means what, you'll stop me?" Lily felt sure her skin turned white.

1,658 0

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