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Rating
15+
Chapters
11
Words
25,853
Characters
Lupin, Snape, Sirius, Lily, James, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
James/Lily
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
Fluff, Romance, Action/Adventure
Era
Marauders
Advisory
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
37
Status
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2011-07-23 3:11pm
Last Chapter
2011-10-16 7:43pm
Last Updated
2011-10-16 7:43pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 The Sorting Hat's Song

For the first time ever, the Great Hall was completely an utterly silent. I bet that if I dropped a pin, I could hear it clatter to the floor. Even Dumbledore looked a bit surprised. 

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2 Detention and Poisonous Plants

 “I’m not putting my hand anywhere near those teeth” Peter told me as we waited in line for our plant.
“You afraid you’re going to get a little plant bite?” Sirius mocked.
“The thing’s bloody poisonous!” Peter exclaimed, looking very worried.
“Don’t worry bud, I’m sure there’s a cure” I reassured him, giving him a pat on the back. I saw Sirius holding back a laugh.

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3 Reading between the lines

 She continued walking without looking back until she disappeared into the castle.

“What is it with her?” I said, trying to keep myself from running after her.

“Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate” Sirius replied.

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4 Bloody Forks and Quidditch Tryouts

 “Hello, fellow Gryffindors” I said, clearing my throat. When I had first tried out, the captain had given a small speech so I figured that I should too. “Welcome to tryouts.”

Scattered applause.

“If you are here today for popularity than get out of this pitch” I said. Some of the students looked shocked by my rudeness. 

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5 Tom Riddle on the Rise

 “My parents sent me a copy of the Daily Prophet in the newspaper today” Remus replied, holding up a newspaper that I hadn’t noticed when sitting down.

“Don’t believe that rubbish” Sirius said. “Last month some old loon reported that he had seen a wild Hippogriff swooping down and eating muggles in central London.”

“Well, this one’s about Riddle” Remus said in a dark tone.

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6 The Practice Match

 “Fine, I’ll offer you a deal” Eddie smirked.

“We’re not taking any deals” I said. “Find a different place to practice.”

I began to turn away and way about ten feet away before Eddie interrupted me.

“We’ll play you for it” He said.



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7 Dumbledore's News

 “Please sit down, James” Dumbledore said politely, not bothering to look up.

I obeyed his command and sat down in a chair across the desk from him.

“You wanted to tell me something, sir?” I asked, feeling awkward. Dumbledore finally looked up, and when he did I was surprised by the look on his face. Dumbledore wasn’t the person to smile a lot, but his face usually had a hint of happiness and joy in it. My surprise came from his extremely grim face.

“What is it, sir?”

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8 An Empty Shell

 The next week of school was one of the hardest of my life. Every time we were in a classroom, I felt like standing up and punching a wall in anger. How could this happen to me?

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9 A Bludger to the Head

 “We’ve got this” I remember whispering to myself right before I felt a sharp pain on my head and everything went black. 

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10 Sectumsempra

  At first I felt nothing but then my chest exploded in pain. Everything went blurry and I barely registered my body slamming into the floor.

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11 Decisions

 “C’mon, mate!” Sirius exclaimed, shoving me off my bed. We were sitting in our dormitory on the morning of winter break. The train would be leaving about an hour from then.

I fell on the floor and propped myself up with my back to my bedside table. Sirius looked down at me.

“Have you gone mental?” He asked.

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