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Rating
12+
Chapters
5
Words
4,843
Characters
Harry, Ginny, Teddy, Albus, James (II), Lily (II), Hugo, Rose, Victoire, OC
Primary Relationship
Other Pairing
Secondary Relationship(s)
Genre(s)
General, Action/Adventure, Young Adult
Era
Next Generation
Advisory
Mild Language
Story Reviews
3
Status
Abandoned
First Published
2012-01-05 11:56pm
Last Chapter
2012-01-30 7:15pm
Last Updated
2012-01-30 7:15pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Free At Last

This is my first shot at HPFF and I want to know if I should continue this story. It's not the best and it's a bit slow but cut me some slack because it is my first try :) any tips would be appreciated. Thanks!
-edit- I don't own the material you recognize, it belongs to JK Rowling

666 2
2 Chudley Cannons VS. Puddlemere United

From Avery's POV, the Potters go to a Chudley Cannons Quidditch game. The chapter is just so-so in my opinion. Please review, I'd love to hear your opinion! Thanks :)

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3 Anticipation

The girls are at Diagon Alley getting ready to go off to Hogwarts! Any reviews and tips would be much appreciated :) enjoy!

1,126 0
4 Off to Hogwarts

It's time for Avery and Addison to go to Hogwarts! I'd really appreciate some reviews so I know how I can improve my story! Thanks for reading :)

1,229 0
5 The Beginning

I'm really sorry these first few chapters are kind of slow but it's all things that have to be done! I promise things will pick up from here. Avery and Addison are at Hogwarts getting sorted! Thanks for all the reads, and I'd really really really love some reviews! Also, thanks to the readers who favorited my story. Enjoy!

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