Rating
15+
Chapters
21
Words
151,324
Characters
Harry, Ron, Hermione
Primary Relationship
Harry/Hermione
Secondary Relationship(s)
Ginny/Dean, Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Ron/Lavender, Ron/Luna
Genre(s)
Drama, Horror/Dark, Mystery, Romance, Action/Adventure, Angst, Young Adult
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Contains profanity, Mild violence, Scenes of a mild sexual nature
Story Reviews
Status
Completed
First Published
2019-12-16 11:45am
Last Chapter
2019-12-18 12:00am
Last Updated
2020-09-06 12:36am
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| Ch. # | Chapter Title | Word Count | Reviews |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 |
1: Chapter Five – An Excess of Phlegm Picks up in Chapter Five of HBP. No changes to the previous four chapters. |
5,206 | 3 |
| 2 |
2: Chapter Six - Draco's Detour Particularly enjoyed reworking a few bits of this chapter. It's slow going on the Harry/Hermione front for the start of the book, but I really loved the pacing/main plot of HBP as it was, and didn't want anything to seem OOC. |
8,249 | 1 |
| 3 |
3: Chapter Seven – The Slug Club Please review :) |
7,805 | 2 |
| 4 |
4: Chapter Eight – Snape Victorious Not tons of H/Hr in this chapter but some little tweaks. Please let me know if you think they're 'natural' in the story/unforced. Hopefully they are! |
4,933 | 2 |
| 5 |
5: Chapter Nine – The Half-Blood Prince Review :) |
7,157 | 2 |
| 6 |
6: Chapter Ten – The Hour Of Gaunt Bits of this chapter are missing as there were no changes at all. Signalled by the '*****' |
2,574 | 0 |
| 7 |
7: Chapter Eleven – Hermione's Helping Hand Review :) |
6,774 | 1 |
| 8 |
8: Chapter Twelve – Silver And Opals A bit of the movie comes in here. Thought it was a really great scene and it worked better than the book version of this trip (though it still stays pretty faithful!) |
7,447 | 2 |
| 9 |
9: Chapter Thirteen - The Secret Riddle Very few changes in here but have left this chapter in as it keeps the flow of the story going and, as this is a faithful retelling, I think that's important. |
7,285 | 1 |
| 10 |
10: Chapter Fourteen – Felix Felicis Small warning, this does get a bit angsty at points! |
8,699 | 6 |
| 11 |
11: Chapter Fifteen – The Unbreakable Vow So this is where the H/Hr element obviously does diverge a fair bit. |
7,731 | 3 |
| 12 |
12: Chapter Sixteen - A Frosty Christmas... And A Fiery New Year The Burrow-fire scene in the HBP film was weird but I think it was worth including as a basis for what comes next... |
9,206 | 1 |
| 13 |
13: Chapter Seventeen – A Sluggish Memory Review! |
6,072 | 3 |
| 14 |
14: Chapter Eighteen– Birthday Surprises Review :) |
8,015 | 1 |
| 15 |
15: Chapter Nineteen – Elf Tails As you'll notice, this is the big one! As always, please review! |
9,350 | 5 |
| 16 |
16: Chapter Twenty – Lord Voldemort's Request So, fully in H/Hr mode now. Again, I really hope that both Harry and Hermione are 'in character' compared to the actual book. Let me know! |
7,928 | 3 |
| 17 |
17: Chapter Twenty-One – The Unknowable Room Review :) |
7,425 | 1 |
| 18 |
18: Chapter Twenty-Two – After The Burial There's a little part in here that I just had to add in, which references a key part in DH (the movie). |
7,344 | 1 |
| 19 |
19: Chapter Twenty-Three - Horcruxes Some little changes here which will be referenced again further down the line. |
6,658 | 3 |
| 20 |
20: Chapter Twenty-Four – Sectumsempra A lot going on in this one. Feedback appreciated as always! |
8,362 | 5 |
| 21 |
21: Chapter Twenty-Five – The Seer Overheard As always, feedback's massively appreciated! |
7,104 | 14 |
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