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Ch 1 The Students Raised with Elves I want to thank a new Beta, Deb. As usual with a good Beta reader, I have had to make some major changes because of her suggestions. Thank you, Deb.
Starts the afternoon of the same day Albus Potter and the Deathly Hallows ends. You really need to read that story first.
You can find my stories, including current updates, on Fanfiction dot net and Wattpad dot com. Jet LaBarge. 2021 |
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Ch 2 A Little Vacation Thank you, Deb, for major suggestions. Some of the dialogue is hers, and the story is much improved by her contributions and criticisms.
The next chapter starts a new year at Hogwarts for Albus and his friends, but before that, we have a little vacation time. |
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Ch 3 The Train Ride and Sorting Thanks as always to JK Rowling, who lets us play in the universe she created. I am using Mafalda Weasley as a character, but of course other than being in Slytherin and not being a heroine type of character, she is totally of my creation.
More major changes because Deb, my Beta, makes sure the story makes sense. Thank you, Deb. Reviews will make both of us happy.
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Ch 4 The Sunday before Classes More about Quidditch, and the dynamics of Slytherin |
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Ch 5 Two Bishops, a Rabbi, Buddhists, and Friar Tuck We learn why the Merry Men were so merry, and a little history. |
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Ch 6 Teddy Undercover, the Basilisk in the Forest I again want to thank my beta Deb for some excellent work on this chapter. We would both appreciate reviews. |
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Ch 7 The Shampoo Business More excellent suggestions and changes by Deb, my Beta. Thank you. |
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Ch 8 The Basilisk in the Forbidden Forest There are characters in this story that are nicer because of my Beta Deb’s contribution. Thank you. |
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Ch 9 A Little This and That Again thank you for my Beta Deb, who frequently challenges me on something I write. |
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Ch 10 Excrement A little barnyard humor. |
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Ch 11 Magical Glasses More worries about the basilisk, and magical glasses to protect you. |
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Ch 12 A Goblin is Using a Wand at Hogwarts I want to thank again my beta Deb, who has made significant improvements in this chapter. |
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Ch 13 Teasing Out The Origins of Magic Some of my theory of magic, and where it came from |
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Ch 14 Christmas holidays 2018 I want to thank my beta Deb for some significant contributions to this chapter. One section was added just because of her suggestions, and her edits have, as always, made the story better.
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Ch 15 Winter into Spring I want to thank my Beta Deb for major changes and additions to this. |
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Ch 16 TR Hadley and the Chamber of Secrets Major changes and additions because of my great Beta Deb. |
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Ch 17 The Day After Minor changes by Deb, my beta, this time. |
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Ch 18 Secrets of The Chamber of Secrets You had to wonder what Albus and Harry found in the chamber. |
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Ch 19 The Hanley Family Breaks Apart More re the Hanley family, or what is left of it. |
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Ch 20 End of the School Year The descriptions are better, and the dialogue is helped by my beta Deb’s suggestions. Thank you. Reviews are always appreciated. |
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Ch 21 “You are not going to Switzerland” Author’s Note. My apologizes to “The Wizard of Oz.”
More dialogue and descriptions from my beta Deb, plus another pointed question that caused me to clarify something. |
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Ch 22 Sunday with the Weasley Clan Excellent additions by Deb and a couple of corrections by Diane, my beta readers. Thank you. |
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Ch 23 Switzerland again for Albus and his Friends More additions to this chapter by Deb. Help from Diane as well. Thank you both. |
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Ch 24 Dinner with the Potters Significant additions by Deb, plus a moderately important change in the story, with more helpful comments and corrections by Diane. Thank you. |
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Ch 25 The Prophesy Interpretation Department Where we learn that Prophecy is not fortune telling |
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Ch 26 Parents of the MELL Students More great work by Deb and Diane, my beta advisors. Thank you. |
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Ch 27 The Opening Ball Many changes because of my two beta readers, Deb and Diane. Thank you for making the story better, and in this case easier to read as well. |
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Ch 28 The International Confederation of Witches and Wizards I want to thank my beta readers Deb and Diane again. |
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Ch 29 The Closing Ball More additions and corrections by Deb and Diane, plus one really stupid mistake they both caught me on. As always, thank you. |
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Ch 30 The Meeting After The ICWW Minor but very good additions by Deb. |
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Ch 31 Jane’s Family Major changes by or inspired by Deb and Diane. Thank you. |
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Ch 32 The Hogwarts Board of Directors Again thanks to Deb and Diane for help with this chapter |
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Ch 33 The end of the summer 2019 Minor but significant rewrites and additions by Deb, and tweaks by Diane. Good beta readers are a blessing. |
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Ch 34 Lily Luna’s Train Ride and Sorting More significant additions and help from Deb and Diane. |
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Ch 35 The First Weeks of School More great additions by Deb, and corrections by Diane |
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Ch 37 After the Hogsmeade Attack More critical edits, additions and corrections by my beta readers. Thank you! |
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Ch 38 Prophetea and a Crystal Balls Thank you, Deb, for more additions and asking for a significant addition from me. |
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Ch 39 Mapping and Apparating When I have to do a major rewrite I am most thankful for my beta readers. |
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Ch 40 Muggle Magic bly minor changes this time, by my beta readers and editors Deb and Diane. |
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Ch 41 Awkward Conversations When Deb complains about something I write I know I have a good Beta. |
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Ch 42 More Frank Talk The end of this chapter is much reworked, with additions by Deb and me, due to her inspiration. I hope you enjoy reading it. I had fun writing it. Diane inspired a few paragraphs of clarification as well. |
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Ch 43 Christmas 2019 Many revisions because of good beta readers. |
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