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Rating
Mature
Chapters
34
Words
63,738
Characters
Harry, Ron, Hermione, Snape, Voldemort, Draco, Fred/George, Ginny, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Ginny/Dean, Ron/Hermione, Harry/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Humor, Romance
Era
Hogwarts
Advisory
Strong Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
145
Status
Completed
First Published
2004-12-20 7:47pm
Last Chapter
2005-05-18 8:25pm
Last Updated
2005-08-23 12:21am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 The Angel of Harry Potter's Heart

Your a 15 year old girl who has twin older brothers Cal and Phil. Your name is brooklyn Carr. Your father gets a job as the minister of magic and you have to move to englad and go to hogwarts. You meet Harry and the gang and soon learn things about youself you've never known before

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2 we're moving?!

You and your brothers find out you have to move to england and go to a school named Hogwarts

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3 3. meeting harry

You finally meet harry! i wonder how thats gonna work out?!

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4 4. Hanging out with Harry

You start to hang out with harry and find hes really really cute

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5 5. Your tour of the town and meeting Brian

You get a nice little tour of the town from Harry and while you do you meet Brian white a very cute boy who lives down the street from you and Harry....

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6 the movies

You go to the movies with Harry and just who happens to be there but....can you guess?? chapter 6 should be up!

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7 the first kiss

Chapter 7 is noooow out!!!! please read and review!!!!

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8 The wheaslys

hey hey hey the next chapter is up so go and look!! And if anyone could make me a banner that would be Awesome!!!

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9 hanging out with Harry

#7 is up so please please please go and look!! Thanks a bunch! and again if anyone can make me a banner that would be GREAT!

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10 the urge to kiss him

Draco said "goooood..." His face was smirking at you and you didn't know why but you had the urge to kiss him.........

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11 I'm always here

You stayed there for a while just hugging Harry. You finally said "Harry?" He said "Yeah?" You said "Thanks..." He smiled and said "Your Welcome. Remember I’m always here." You said "I know..."

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12 The hogwarts express

You grinned thankfully and said "Yes please!" You held his hand and walked all the way to the boys dressing rooms. He grinned and said "You've got to let go of me now...unless of course you want to come in with me?"

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13 You're an Angel

DD was smiling and his eyes seemed to twinkle under his half moon glasses. He said "Are you sure you want to know what will happen?" You took a deep breath and said "Yes." He said "Before I tell you, you must understand something about yourself." You thought that statement was weird but said "Alright...” He said "You’re an Angel." You gulped *what?!?!* you thought.

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14 The first quidditch match

The game was going great. It was 50 pts. To 40 pts. With Gryffindor in the lead.....All of a sudden you see the hufflepuff seeker diving for the snitch and Harry is Far behind him! You said "Hurry Harry!" He looked at you and grinned as if saying 'watch this' Harry dived down after the hufflepuff seeker gaining with every second. Everyone was cheering and he suddenly did a flip in the air and zoomed high in the air to you. You raised your eyebrows and said "What are you doing Harry?? GO CATCH THE SNITCH!!" Harry grinned and revealed his right hand with the snitch in it.

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15 The morning after the game

You woke up the next morning very tired but happy none the less. You got up and dressed and went down to breakfast with Ginny and Hermione. At breakfast you could tell all the Gryffindors were exhausted! You all walked to class half-asleep.

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16 Chad

You woke up and said "Oh no! We have to go to school Twins!!" They groaned but got up. You said "Thanks so much Chad! Love ya muah!" You gave him a kiss on his cheek but he pulled you back for a real kiss on his lips...You didn't pull away you just kissed back. He pulled away and said "Bye Brook."

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17 No fireworks...

You went to walk up the stairs but to your surprise Dean had gotten up and grabbed your hand. You turned to see him grinning at you. He reached in and kissed you. You just stood there surprised. He pulled away grinning from ear to ear. You put on a forced smile and said "Night." He said "Good night." and you walked up to your dorm thinking *Oh man...That really didn't feel right...Good maybe...but not anything special...no fireworks.*

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18 WHO LIKES ME?!

Hermione said "I know who likes you too...Its SO obvious! I mean, Just the way he looks at you! I can't believe you can't see it!" You said "WHO IS IT?!"

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19 Katie's dresses for all occasions

You all walked to 'Katie's dresses for all occasions.' And walked inside. There was nobody in there except for a young girl about 15 or 16who was behind the counter reading a magazine and looking bored. She had blonde hair, like your own, that went down to her mid back.

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20 shopping!!

Harry grinned slyly and you said "What have you been up to??" He said "Oh…Just shopping..."

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21 The dance

You go to the dance and something happens that you want to forget...

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22 A friend you'd never expect

You and Harry get in a fight and the last person you expect surprises you and comforts you.

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23 Draco's confession

Draco hugged you tighter and said "I-I didn't know what to do Brook...Brian was asked to kill a little boy and he did and he’s a death eater now. He has the mark and everything..."

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24 You and Hermione's fight

You went to walk away but Hermione said "Wait Brooklyn I--" You said "I know your Sorry. But you don't mean it! And you know very well I haven't been lying...I CAN'T lie...."

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25 Violet

You meet a girl named Violet who has alot of secrets and is very mysterious...what will you think of her?

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26 The Minis

You find out you have little Mini-me's and they are a key factor in fighting voldemort

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27 Training

You start your training with the mini's and you find out who your new teacher is

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28 Cliff

number 28 is up! go look

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29 Cho Change: the epitomy of evil

number's 28 and 29 are up go look!!

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30 Best friends again

Chapter 30 should be up soon!!!

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31 It's not safe at hogwarts anymore!

Chapter 30 and 31, delivered to you from meeee :)

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32 learning...

Okay this one is really short but bare with me i'm writing as fast as i can!!

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33 Draco's summer home

Numbers 31 and 32 and 33 are up!! :)

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34 ~The End~

This is the end of my story...i hope you all liked it love you xoxo bye bye -kim-

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