review please oh and sorry if I put my OC in to much please comment on how it is and please give me song ideas thx
contest for the best
Bubbles POV.
"you belong with meeeee you belong with me " I finish singing with my sisters as we finish practicing for the big trip this upcoming day" oh I can't wait " I say hugging my adopted sister Alice as her glowing green eyes glitter. " Yes it's going to be so fun" Alice says sweetly twirling her waist long blond hair " but what I'm wanting this weekend is to sing my heart out and express my feelings through the songs" Alice says taking the guitar strap off and putting the white guitar away. " Actually that's a good idea" my sister blossom say's putting away her pink guitar in her case " whatever I just want to eat the free food" my other sister buttercup says packing up her drum set in a giant bag. " BC how did you get that" I ask her " well you see I was walking in a sports store and I saw this and it said anything can fit in it so I thought why not, oh and blossom here's your credit card back" buttercup said tossing blossoms card back " buttercup if you spent all the money I am personally going to kill you" she said with anger in her voice " I didn't" BC said back " ok stardust lets pack up and get ready to leave" blossom orders us. Me and my sisters are in a band called stardust Alice had thought of the name and we all liked it so we called ourselves stardust. For four years me and my sisters have been across the globe singing for peoples entertainment all over the world we are famous and this month were in our home town Townsville. "So ten bucks says were flying with other bands" buttercup says loudly " twenty says were not" Alice pitches in " I don't know I got to go with BC on this one" I say walking towards buttercup" ok ten more for me" Alice says as if she knows were flying just as a band with no one else" I'm going for Alice on this one" blossom says " after all she's always right" blossom says bringing up that Alice has a special power to go forward and back in time. You see me and my sisters are still the powerpuff girls Alice being the white one her puff name being bell but crime went down and we decided to be rock stars instead. " oh right" buttercup and I say in union" that will be twenty bucks" Alice says with a smile on her face " no you don't"
Buttercup stats back " suit yourself" Alice says as she disappears then comes back with luggage and twenty bucks in her hand " thank you" she says very sweetly. "Hey" buttercup says angrily "hold that thought" and she disappears and reappears again this time with our luggage. "Thank you " the other three of us say in union " no problem" she says " ok lets go" blossom says as we all say our goodbyes and fly to the airport we usually take a car but we thought it would be faster and it was we got their in less than a minute.
Blossoms POV.
As we get to the airport we see some other bands their were only seven bands in total us included " well well well looks like we have another stupid looking band against us" I turn around recognizing the voice coming face to face with my mirror image Berserk " oh girls come here looks like were facing more idiotic band then we think" berserk calls her sisters over when I notice a girl wearing all grey" so which one of you girls are my mirror image" the grey girl asked rudely. " Hi my names Alice and if you call my sisters idiots again I swear I will " Alice says getting cut off by the girl in grey " or what you'll beat us up, weaklings like you ha" she says turning away and laughing an stupid horrible laugh " and my names Aryl now I suggest you back off ,me and my sisters are going to win this and you losers can't do anything about it " she high-five's her sisters and they all glare at us and mouth 'idiots' that was enough to make Alice snap " what did you just call my sisters" Alice says quietly in a deadly voice she was twitching and a dark looming shadow over her eyes making her look like she could kill anyone in less than a second " I said they were losers-" just before she could end her sentence Alice appeared all around the place no one knowing which was the real Alice. " this is going to be fun" all the images say and they all through knives at Aryl she screams and we all see the real Alice walk back to us " that was only fake illusion knives but don't think I won't do that in real life" she says her eyes turning a dark grey almost black. Aryl gulps and then says " lets go these girls are stinking up my image" they try to walk away but Alice stops them by saying" are you scared that we're better singers then you" they shoot around " what did you say" they all say in union "that your scared we'll beat you" Alice keeps talking back until finally they say" that's it bring it on"
Alice smirks " five minute to choose a song" she says then faces us " what happened "bubbles says staring at Alice like she's gone insane till I realize that I am to . I look at buttercup who's mouth is on the ground staring at Alice" oh yeah did I forget to mention I have a split personality" she says to us scratching the back of her head " anyway we have to show these girls we rock so we need to choose a song and fast" she continues " I know how about lights" bubbles says cheerfully " ok" we all agree " who's going to sing it" I ask finally saying something.
" Personally I think Alice should sing it she got us in this mess and we can finally hear her sing" buttercup states as we all remember that we've never heard Alice sing " what no I'm not singing" Alice says freaking out " please" we say using our puppy dog eyes " fine" she says " but only cause they get on my nerve" she says as we set up our instruments which we had many of " ready girls" I say " ready" they say back and that was the start of the contest for the best .