Okay guys this is my first fan fiction after months of reading them I have
always had plot's in my mind but have never been able to put them on paper
well here's my first try. Please tell me what ever is on your mind when
you read this. By whatever I mean if you like it, dislike it and why, what
I am doing wrong as far as my writing and/or if you like the plot and want
to run with it as long as im involved it don't really care as long as you
tell me. So here it goes.
"I can't believe my life can suck so much"
I said to myself as I was sitting at my window at 2:00 am looking out to the house across the street. The house across the street was the source of my crappy state of mind now and always. I watch as the only thing that gave me happiness arrived at the driveway getting out of his car, raising his arms above his head and moving it from side to side.
I watched as his friends joined him exchanging hugs and laughing at something funny somebody said. I can see pretty good but from my window but sometimes I wish I could hear them just to be apart of their world.
The felling of sadness that came over me was nothing new. My life really did suck. I was a super, super shy 16 soon-to-be 17 year old with a very low self esteem, no friends, shity parents that never wonder why there daughter is always in her room and doesn't go out like a normal teenager and the worst of all things.. I had a crush on somebody that was like a star in the sky.untouchable.
I watched as they all went inside the house and left me felling like I couldn't breath. Like always all do is watch. I walk to my bed and lay down thinking about the first day I saw him.
**Flashback**
"God can it be anymore hotter out here?" I asked my mother who was going throw boxes in the kitchen.
"Honey you are just going to have to get used to it. Things will be better for us here you'll see. It's like a new start," she said with a smile on her face.
I just smiled and went out side to get more of my things from the van. You see we just moved here from Alabama where we have lived all my life. I just could believe my mom and dad when they just came up to me and said "Hey were moving to L.A." I looked at them like they were nuts. But sure enough here we are in good old L.A. It's not like I miss home I didn't do anything just go to school and go up to my room.
I bent down to pick up a box from the sidewalk, which was hell, its self because of my bad back.
"Damn 34D cups im gonna cut you down as soon as I have the money for it'
I said out loud and immediately looked around to see if anyone had heard me and that's when I saw him in the front driveway wearing baggy workout pants and a white tank top washing his car.
I almost fell over the box on my face and in my head I could hear the song Desert Rose by Sting. I was like in a dream, it was so hot I thought I was seeing things because I have NEVER seen a man look as perfect as the one that was in my line of sight.
My mind screamed death threats at my mother who called me inside to have some lunch. And that's when I heard the name I will remember for the rest of my life.
"Dominic Toretto for the last time if you don't come inside right now im gonna give your food to Vince"
"I can't believe my life can suck so much"
I said to myself as I was sitting at my window at 2:00 am looking out to the house across the street. The house across the street was the source of my crappy state of mind now and always. I watch as the only thing that gave me happiness arrived at the driveway getting out of his car, raising his arms above his head and moving it from side to side.
I watched as his friends joined him exchanging hugs and laughing at something funny somebody said. I can see pretty good but from my window but sometimes I wish I could hear them just to be apart of their world.
The felling of sadness that came over me was nothing new. My life really did suck. I was a super, super shy 16 soon-to-be 17 year old with a very low self esteem, no friends, shity parents that never wonder why there daughter is always in her room and doesn't go out like a normal teenager and the worst of all things.. I had a crush on somebody that was like a star in the sky.untouchable.
I watched as they all went inside the house and left me felling like I couldn't breath. Like always all do is watch. I walk to my bed and lay down thinking about the first day I saw him.
**Flashback**
"God can it be anymore hotter out here?" I asked my mother who was going throw boxes in the kitchen.
"Honey you are just going to have to get used to it. Things will be better for us here you'll see. It's like a new start," she said with a smile on her face.
I just smiled and went out side to get more of my things from the van. You see we just moved here from Alabama where we have lived all my life. I just could believe my mom and dad when they just came up to me and said "Hey were moving to L.A." I looked at them like they were nuts. But sure enough here we are in good old L.A. It's not like I miss home I didn't do anything just go to school and go up to my room.
I bent down to pick up a box from the sidewalk, which was hell, its self because of my bad back.
"Damn 34D cups im gonna cut you down as soon as I have the money for it'
I said out loud and immediately looked around to see if anyone had heard me and that's when I saw him in the front driveway wearing baggy workout pants and a white tank top washing his car.
I almost fell over the box on my face and in my head I could hear the song Desert Rose by Sting. I was like in a dream, it was so hot I thought I was seeing things because I have NEVER seen a man look as perfect as the one that was in my line of sight.
My mind screamed death threats at my mother who called me inside to have some lunch. And that's when I heard the name I will remember for the rest of my life.
"Dominic Toretto for the last time if you don't come inside right now im gonna give your food to Vince"