This is only the beginning of a big thing, but feel free to review and criticize this small part.
Ketsuraku Sai got up. It was Friday, after school, the thirteenth of February, the year 2009. Tomorrow was the day he'd give the gift he'd been saving for the girl of his dreams, now if only he could muster the courage.
It was funny, actually, here was a guy who could stand twenty-two feet in the air, supported only by a couple of twigs attached to a tree, without even blinking, and he was nervous about simply giving a gift to a girl. Weird world we live in, eh?
He got up and stood, put his favorite jacket on, slipped the sacred present into his pocket, and went off for a walk. He made a brief stop at the park to look at the swings that he could've been on with her last summer. Sighing, he walked on, lost in his own thoughts.
Unfortunately enough, the neighborhood gang, composed of the stereotypical dark skinned troublemakers, had been drugging themselves up that night. They were driving around the area in their truck, with half the gang sitting in the back, swerving and bumping into things and causing general mayhem.
Poor Sai, he wasn't even aware of the danger when he died.