"The Cold one's" (a warrior's fanfic)
Chapter 1
Mousebrain
"Shadowpaw" her mentor Stardust said angrily. "What am I doing wrong now?" Shadowpaw sighed. "Your hunter's crouch is way off for starters" Stardust mewed. "How?" Shadowpaw challenged.
"Just try again" Stardust instructed. "Fine!" Shadowpaw rolled her eyes.
Shadowpaw crept forward her belly fur barley touching the ground, her tail leveled out behind her. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath Stonerock". "A meeting?" Shadowpaw looked up at her mentor.
"Let's go see what Snowstar has to say" Stardust sighed sluggishly. The two cats made their way beneath Stonerock. One day I'll stand there, becoming a warrior!. Shadowpaw's paws tingled with excitement at the idea.
"It is always a privilege to announce the naming ceremony of new apprentices" Snowstar called. "Icekit and Almoundkit, step forward". The kits stepped forward in front of their clan leader. "Icekit, I trust you will uphold the warrior code and train your hardest to become a noble warrior of Frostclan" Snowstar paused. "I-I do" Icekit stammered.
"Very well, Spiderfang you will mentor Icekit" Snowstar meowed. "I trust you to pass on every thing you know onto Icekit". "I do, I mean yes" the young tom corrected himself. Snowstar nodded
"Icekit from now on your new apprentice name is Icepaw, I look forward to calling to you for your warrior ceremony". Icepaw stepped forward to touch noses with her mentor, her black paws shaking for the fear of messing up. Spiderfang had the hint of a smirk on his face, he leaned over and touched Icepaw's nose to his. Shadowpaw looked over to Almoundkit, shaking with nervousness.
"Almoundkit, I expect the same from you as your sister" Snowstar meowed loudly. "Do you promise to uphold the warrior code and soon serve as a trusted warrior of Frostclan?" "I do" Icepaw's brother rang out more confidently than his sister. "Let's hope so, Beachclaw you will mentor Almoundkit" Snowstar declared.
"Almoundkit from now on your apprentice name will be Almoundpaw, Beachclaw I trust you will pass on your knowledge to your very first apprentice". "You can count on it" he said loud enough for Shadowpaw to hear the echo. Snowstar nodded slowly. The new apprentice padded forward, Beachclaw stretched his neck down to touch Almoundpaw's nose.
"Icepaw, Almoundpaw, Icepaw, Almoundpaw!" The crowd rang out.
Icepaw was literately about to cry out in joy. Look at Icepaw basking at all the attention she's getting, Shadowpaw thought. She was always a suck up.
"Ugh, just look at her" a voice mewed. Shadowpaw turned around fur standing on end. "Fernpaw!" Shadowpaw hissed. "You nearly scared my fur off!"
Fernpaw shrugged. "How much fresh kill you bet she's the next Tigerstar?" Shadowpaw shoved her playfully. "You don't really believe in him do you, I mean Firestar's enemy is dead right?" Shadowpaw gasped. "True, but still" Fernpaw sighed.
There was loud paw step's coming down the ridge the next morning.
Shadowpaw stuck her head out of the apprentice den. Snowstar raced out of his den. "What's wrong?" Snowstar's voice quivered. "It's Icepaw she's been captured by Lavaclan!" Spiderfang gasped.
"What!" Shadowpaw shrieked.
To be continued….
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