hi this is my first fan fic ever, so plz give me ideas, tell me where im going wrong , and suggest improvements ...most of all review! thnx Fatal
After haunted. It's Suze's 17th birthday. Jesse is officially her boyfriend and apart from shifter lessons Paul has stayed well out of her way. Life's perfect, until a group of thuggish ghosts attack her, a small 5 year old ghost of a girl appears in her room and Paul hasn't really given up on Suze after all. JS
Suze's POV
"Susannah" I heard a voice whispering in my ear "Susannah, it's time for school Susannah".
I turned over in my bed "ten more minutes" I moaned. I heard a chuckle and then suddenly I was picked up in a pair of strong muscular arms.
"Jesse" I laughed "put me down, I'm up, and what if Dope- I mean Brad comes in to wake me up and sees me floating in the middle of the room huh?" I gave him a How-am-i-gonna-explain-that look.
"I'm sorry Susannah" and with a small smile he put me down again.
"You'd better be" I said grinning.
Slowly I got up and walked into the bathroom; I took one look at myself in the mirror and winced. My hair looked like I'd blow-dried it into an afro style.
After I'd showered and put enough mouse on my hair that ten girls could use, I realised Jesse had gone, typical men I thought sighing sadly. I checked the time. Damn I'm late. I grabbed a pair of black trousers and tank top, threw them on, skipped breakfast, ran out to sleepy's car and jumped in just as he was pulling out of the drive.
"I didn't think you were coming miss I'm-too-cool-to-get-up-on-time-for-once" smirked Dopey
Since I couldn't think of a smart reply to this, I elbowed him dangerously close to his lower region
"ow, you bitch"
I smiled, pleased with myself. Maybe this was going to be a good day after all, at least that was what I was thinking when I got out of the car, only to find myself face to face with 5 brutish men. Oh and did I mention that they were dead?.
ps. sorry this is a short first chappy, the next 1 will be longer ok