I rewrite chapter 1, it's better than the original I think. I changed a lot in my story blah blah blah... Anyway please don't hate me for making stupid mistakes. My grammar is not perfect, cause English is not my native language. I hope you'll enjoy my story. Please leave a comment, I want to know is it worth continuing or is it terrible. If it is I will apologize for wasting your time ;)

Disclaimer: Sadly I don't own any of NCIS:LA character. I only own the ones created by my imagination.


Sunday, February 1st 2015, Julia's home, Los Angeles

Julia heard doorbell ringing, she went to doors and opened them. She saw two federal agents holding her unconscious daughter with a big bruise on her forehead and Hetty behing them. Without saying a word she let them in. Men put Kensi on a couch and left, Hetty stayed.

"Wh-what happened to Kensi? Why is she unconscious? Is she..." Hetty didn't let her finish.

"Don't worry Mrs Feldman, Kensi will be fine. She just has to rest, she shouldn't leave home for a week. Will you take care of her?'

"Of course I will. But what happened?"

"I can't tell, it's classified" said Hetty and left the room heading to the doors.


Monday, February 2nd 2015, Julia's home, Los Angeles

Few hours after Hetty bring her unconscious daughter to home Kensi is still sleeping. She heard quiet mumbling and went to the living room to see if everything is alright.

"Deeks, that's my side of the bed, move or I'll have to punish you" Kensi said in her sleep with big smile on her face.

Julia wasn't sure if she wants to listen rest of Kensi's mumbling so she walked over to the bed and slightly poked Kensi's hand.

"Kensi honey wake up" No reaction. "Kensi! Wake up, no more sleeping!"

Kensi got up rapidly "What the hell mom? You didn't have to yell at me"

"I had to, other way I'd never wake you up. I raised you, so I know you and your habits, remember?"

"Point taken"

"Gosh, my head hurts like a bitch! And what the heck happened, what am I doing in here? I was in Mammoth, snowboarding with Deeks and now I'm in LA, why?"

"I don't know honey, last night I heard doorbell ringing, I opened the door and Hetty with some agents bring you here. They left before I found out what's going on. I hoped I'll get answers from you."

"Oh...I'll ask Deeks or Nell later"

Kensi felt something between her fingers, she never wore rings, so she raised her hand and saw golden wedding band on her finger. Heavy breathing and terrified she asked "M-m-mom wha-what is th-this?!"

"I'd like to know" Julia sat on a couch and took a closer look on Kensi's hand. "I really would like to know what's going on"


Monday, December 15th 2014, Plaza shopping mall, Los Angeles

Kensi was staring at Deeks, she couldn't say anything.

"What's going on, you're freaking me out" Deeks asked her.

"Oh my gosh, plenty things to say and when the time comes you can't say them... um..." Kensi is still hesitating, but she decided to finally say what she really feels.

"Just you and me, Kensi and Deeks, Deeks and Kensi. A-alone we're bold, we're brash, we can move mountains and together we're um..."

"Together we're safe" Deeks finished her sentence.

"Yeah. together we're safe"

"I wanna be bold Deeks... but I wanna be bold with you" said Kensi and reaching for his hand and grasped it, threading her fingers through his as she pressed their palms together.

"So no more games then?" Deeks looked her in the eyes and asked, he still couldn't believe it's happening.

She shook her head and promised to him "No more games"

"Chips on a table?"

"All in" Kensi said with smile spreading across her face.

"All in" Deeks also smiled and repeated after Kensi.

"Tonight"

"Tomorrow"

"And the day aft..." Deeks didn't let Kensi finish by pressing his lips to hers.


After their passionate kiss they shared there was another one...and another one. There would be more kisses, but it was a very cold day in Los Angeles, so they had to stop to prevent catching a cold.

"It's cold in here, maybe we should go to Starbucks and get a hot coffee? I would kill for a cappuccino. Literally kill" Kensi couldn't say it in a more frightening way.

"Everything for you princess. We'll get you a cup of cappuccino, maybe two, just don't kill anybody. I don't want to visit you in prison or end up in a grave. And I'm just sayin', you kill me and my ghost will haunt you for the rest of your life, are we clear?"

"Yes, we're clear. You're paying for my coffee and I promise I'm not going to hurt you in any way..."

"So we cut a deal, I'm paying for my inviolability"

"You didn't let me finish! I'm not going to hurt you in any way... today. But you already said that you're paying, you can't revoke what you said" Kensi laughed derisively.

"Damn sneaky woman" Deeks said while searching for a wallet in his jacket.


"We should go home and start packing our things, but first we're going to my mom" Said Kensi finishing her second cup of coffee.

"Why we're going to your mom Kensi?" Deeks wasn't sure if it's good idea, it would be awkward to go there and just pretend everything is as usual.

"We have something to announce, don't you think?" Kensi gave him a smile, she couldn't be happier than today.


Monday, December 15th 2014, behind the artificial Christmas Tree in Plaza shopping mall, Los Angeles

I'm standing behind the artificial Christmas Tree, watching my target skating with her friends. She's got brown hair, olive skin and mismatched eyes. She's definitely a girl from the photo Malczyk gave me. She was easy to find, but my target is driving different roads every day to avoid tailing, she got skills. Something tells me she's not another girl that saw something she shouldn't have seen, Malczyk lied to me. There is something unique about this girl, it's not about the business, it's personal. Killing her would hurt somebody, that's what Malczyk want.

"All in" - she said.

"All in" - the man with blonde, scruffy hair repeated.

I'm not very good at it, so that's all I was able to read from their lips. They're holding their hands, sharing that "puppy in love" look. Either he's her boyfriend or soon will be boyfriend. My doubts vanished when he kissed her and she didn't push him back.

When lovebirds finished their too long making out session they left the ice rink and headed to the Starbucks. I just have to go after them, sit near and listen their conversation.

"So... we're still going to Mammoth?" The man asked my target.

"Why do you even ask? You want me to change my mind Deeks? Of course we're going to Mammoth"

So the man's name is Deeks, very weird name. But more interesting part is that they're going to Mammoth. Killing highly trained person in LA would be hard, but Mammoth? This makes my job easier. I'll follow them to Mammoth and kill her in there.

"We should go home and start packing our things, but first we're going to my mom"

"Why we're going to your mom Kensi?"

"We have something to announce, don't you think?" Kensi smiled and took his hand. The man paid for the coffee and left the Starbucks.


My job for today is done, so I stayed at the cafe and ordered big cup of tea. Hot green tea is very good after standing in cold for like an hour. While I was enjoying my tea I realized that my target, Kensi looks familiar. I have feeling that I've seen her before and I know that there is no chance we met previously. But her eyes, I've already seen those eyes, I just don't know where. Suddenly my cogitations were interrupted by ringtone of my cell phone.

"Yes?"

"Mów po polsku idioto" (Speak in Polish you idiot)

"Eh... Czego chcesz Malczyk? Znalazłem ją. To jest moje ostatnie zlecenie i odchodzę, zrozumiałeś? (Eh... What do you want Malczyk? I found her. That's my last assignment and I quit, understood?)

"Jeszcze zobaczymy. W każdym razie zmieniłem zdanie, nie zabijesz jej, tylko przywieziesz do mnie, żywą. Płacę podwójnie." (We'll see. Anyway I changed my mind, you won't kill her. Instead of it you'll bring her to me, alive. I pay double.)


Tuesday, December 2nd, 2014, OSP

"Miss Jones, could you bring me the files of Tomasz Malczyk?" Hetty asked, she has to find out why Malczyk is hunting for one of hers. After all this years I thought it was over when I didn't put a bullet in his head and let him escape, but I was so wrong.

*May 1996, Bosnia and Herzegovina*

*He's kneeling in front of me, begging for life. My hand is holding my Walther PPK, my finger is on a trigger, my Walther is on his forehead.

"Henrietta, don't, don't do it. All those things I did because they forced me, they killed my wife. I didn't do it they framed me, I loved Anna, I still do. Henrietta, please, I beg you" He was crying but I don't care. I know he's lying. He murdered Anna, he murdered Marcin, he murdered Jan. The only thing he loved and still love is his job. But his second job, he doesn't love being GROM commander, he loves selling arms, he loves making money. He's a liar, manipulative liar. He used me, he's still using me and I'm letting him do it. I put the gun down.

"Run Tomek!" He quickly got up and escaped.

I let him escape, I should kill him, but I couldn't. One day I will regret this decision.*

The ghost from her past decided to come back and haunt me.

"Yes Hetty, should I find something about some of his associates too?" The analyst asked me.

"Indeed" - I answered. What would I do without Nell Jones? This girl provides me every informations I need, even the ones no one else could provide me. Let's hope this time she's also going to find them, cause if she won't...this can end very bad for all of us.

When it comes to Malczyk I'm just a powerless, vulnerable little woman.


First chapter it is! I hope you enjoyed it. Please leave a comment, I want to know what you think about it.

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