So this piece is really just for practice, but I hope you like it. I'm not sure what I'm going to do with it but, meh who knows I like the idea.
Her eyes shot open, she smelled something, it was over whelming, bitter, suffocating, almost like something was- Like something was burning. It took her a second before her brain registered it. And with her sudden movement she fell out of bed, picking her self up quickly she scrambled down the hall, practically tumbled down the stairs, and slide to a stop in the kitchen, the source of the smoke. She nearly fell over when she saw her housemate Kimber trying to put out a flaming bowl with a dish rag.
"What are you doing?" She screamed knocking Kimber out of the way and she took the bowl and threw it in the sink, dosing it with water from the fosset.
"I was trying to make cereal." Kimber scoffed crossing her arms in anger.
She didn't even know how to respond to that, she lifted a finger to point out how this was impossible but then put it down in defeat, she needed to hear how this happened first. "How do you- but- what did you-" She sighed heavily before being able to continue. "How do you manage to set cereal, of all things, on fire?"
Kimber let out an exaggerated sigh. "It was to cold so I put it in the oven to warm up, it's a European thing okay? And I left it in to long because I went to go check the data on my latest project, it took longer than expected so, the cereal caught fire." When she was done she looked at the oven, quickly turning it off and smiling widely.
She smacked her forehead and looked at her friend seriously. "You do realize our entire house could have burned down?" Kimber nodded. "And you do realize that you cannot put out a fire with a dish rag?" She nodded again. "OK good, I was just making sure you weren't a completely stupid."
Kimber frowned. "Well Ashlynn if you would get up earlier we wouldn't have to worry about me burning things."
"And why is that?" Ashlynn questioned in annoyance.
"Because you would be able to make me breakfast and I wouldn't have to eat cereal." She pouted.
Ashlynn gave in and smiled. "At least my days are never boring," she mused. "how about we clean this up and I'll make chocolate chip pancakes while you tell me how this project of yours is going."
A while later...
"So your trying to create a portal?" Ashlynn asked shoving another bite of pancake in her mouth.
"Yes, that's exactly what I'm trying to do, it's just been very unstable lately, but I'm almost positive that's a good thing." Kimber explained threw the pancake she already had in her mouth.
Ashlynn rolled her eyes at her as she took a sip of milk. Kimber was a freakin' genius and yet she had to be one of the most thoughtless people she knew. "So where will it go?"
Kimber paused and started laughing nervously. "Well, you see..."
"You don't know where it goes do you?" Ashlynn deadpanned.
"No, but it doesn't matter what matters is, if, I can create a portal to anywhere at all it'll be much simpler to specify places later."
"Yeeeah, and what if something dangerous and destructive comes out of that portal, it'll be in our house for crying out loud! What do you plan to do about that?" Her voice was stern and agitated, she didn't want fucking aliens running a muck in her house. God knows the FBI and the CIA would be here in milla-seconds, asking all sorts of questions.
Kimber scratched the back of her head and laughed again. "I hadn't really thought about that, well it wouldn't matter it'd be in the basement."
And this is what she meant by thoughtless, Ashlynn sighed and shook her head. "Well I can only hope that your portal just brings us hot guys that aren't cannibals." She glared at Kimber when she said cannibals.
"Okay so the cloning experiment went wrong-" she was cut off by Ashlynn.
"REALLY wrong." Ashlynn commented. "Continue."
"Okay it went really wrong, but this one is going to win me a Noble Peace prize, I just know it." She had this dreamy look in her eyes again, but it faded to determination. "I just have to find out what the missing component is!"
And with that she got up and went back down to the basement slamming the door behind her. Ashlynn let out a wary sigh, she worried about Kimber sometimes, okay more like all the time. She was a smart girl, and would some day be a valued member of some sort of science team, but right now no one took her seriously, she was just a teenage girl with big dreams. I mean sure she was recognized for her talents at science fairs for her machines and gadgets, never for her biology, they learned this the hard way with tiny mutant cannibals. But she was determined to show the world that she could be more than that.
She decided that she should check the mail after cleaning up the kitchen, walking down the drive way she took a moment to just enjoy the warm summer air. Although soon enough it'd be hotter than hell it's self out here. She looked threw the mail, bills, bills, bills, and a little package? Hm, it was for Kimber.
She walked to the basement and opened the door. "Kimber! You have a package!"
After some rustling and loud clanging noises Kimber made it to the door. "YES! This is exactly what I need, this should be up and running in no time at all!" And with out even a pause, she ran back down stairs talking excitedly to herself.
Ashlynn inwardly groaned, she wasn't exactly to excited to see what came out of that portal. She took a look at the bills again, the electricity had rose by at least a thousand dollars! She banged her head on the table, she suddenly felt lucky that all this money was left to her when her grandmother died. Her grandmother had been filthy stinking' rich, and she could have given it to anyone of her children or grandchildren, but she gave it to Ashlynn because she knew how badly she wanted to go to collage for bio-chemistry, and here she was going to the best bio-chemistry collage in the world, in a nice house in a quiet neighborhood. Another good thing about this was she could afford all the things Kimber needed to complete her 'projects'. Otherwise they would be in debt to the mob, or just flat out poor. But still, a two thousand dollar electric bill was a lot. She was just about to go speak with Kimber about this when the house shook, and maniacal laughter rang in her ears. I guess whatever came in that package really did the trick.
Ashlynn quickly ran into the basement, despite the terrible things that might be down there. When she found Kimber she was inspecting a few bodies on the ground wearing, Akatsuki cloaks? What did she bring in cos-players?
"Your portal brought us, cos-players?" She asked cautiously.
"Yeah I guess so, I was hoping for something cool." she huffed. Ashlynn let out a sigh of relief. "Plus the portal broke quickly after wards. Stupid piece of crap diamonds."
"Looks like their passed out." she poked the one that looked like Hidan with her foot.
"Yeah, I guess it's a side effect." Kimber sighed as she bent down to get a closer look at them. "I think almost all of them are here, except for Tobi, but maybe that's because they have Sasori and wanted to be true to the manga."
Ashlynn shrugged and poked 'Hidan' with her foot again. "I kinda wish they were real, ya know, it would be fun to meet them. But then again, I don't think I'd want cereal killers with chakra powers running around in my house."
"True enough, these costumes are really good, I wonder how long it took them to make the masks.." She trailed off obviously thinking about something.
"Kimber, can you tell where they came from?" Ashlynn asked curiously, she was now using 'Deidara' as a chair.
"Oh of course I can, just hold on a sec." She walked over to her computer you could here the clicking of her keyboard. Her brow furrowed. "This can't be right." She mumbled.
"What can't be right?" she asked, her curiosity was slowly turning to fear.
"My data says that their not even from this reality, but I don't understand how that's even possible unless..." she stopped and ran over to her broken portal machine.
"Unless what?" Ashlynn was getting nervous, this didn't sound to good.
Kimber stood up with a sample of the diamond dust and took it to the microscope. "God dammit! This wasn't a real diamond!"
"Well?" Ashlynn prompted.
"It's just quartz, it threw off the entire experiment! The quartz tricked the portal but in the process ripped a hole in time and space briefly before shutting down, witch is why we now have the real Akatsuki passed out cold in our basement." she sighed heavily and sat down in her chair with a huff.
Ashlynn looked down at the passed out Deidara she was sitting on and quickly got off to go stand next to Kimber. "Are you sure?" she asked half excited half terrified.
"I'm absolutely positive." Kimber frowned. "Despite the shear coolness of having S-Rank criminals sleeping in our basement, I think we should come up with a plan."
"Yeah, I think your right, because if we don't handle this right, we're both going to be dead." Ashlynn smiled. "But we have lots of leverage, I know them all to well from being a Naruto fan, and your the only one who can get them back. So we shouldn't worry to much, this could be rather entertaining."
"Yeah, and ignoring the fact that their murders, you got your wish for hot guys." Kimber laughed, Ashlynn couldn't help but laugh to, so much for a relaxing summer of sleeping in and going to the beach.
Reviews guys, I need motivation and I like to know I'm not just doing this for no reason, I'm actually starting to like this idea, and this is my first story in 3rd person witch I'm not to good at so pointers please? :3