Hey guys, I thought I'd go ahead and stray away from CDOH for now and start on another story. I'll still work on chapter 6 don't worry, I just felt like starting something new, so here's "Greatest Treasure"


The boat was rocking softly, back and forth as I slumbered into my captain's bed. My name's Koroken, I'm a lone sailing Floatzel blazin' across the seas for treasure. I ain't sharin' any of treasure or riches with anyone but myself.

Someone pecked at my face

There's this treasure in the island that I'm sailin' to now…yer not gonna believe how much treasure there's gonna be…

There was another peck at my face

Eh? Who the hell's doin' that!

I woke up unhappy and slammed my head on the wood of the floor above. "Ow Dammit! Who the hell's peckin' me!" I shouted out looking around. "Ow! Peckin' me peckin' me!" I heard someone mock me, I quickly looked up, it was a Chatot with an eye patch on one eye…That's my little bird Tenor.

"Ugh…Tenor…I was sleepin' yer idiot!" I shouted at him rubbing my head again. "Idiot! Idiot!" Tenor mocked, flying around and laughing. I sighed and stood up from my bed, and looked at myself in the mirror. I was a Floatzel…blue eyes, wearin' a Sapphire stoned necklace. It was some trinket from my old man…never cared about him very much…but if it ain't for him I wouldn't be here…

I looked up at Tenor "Are we close?" Tenor flapped and landed on my shoulders "Close!" he said. I ran outside and took the wheel of my ship…it wasn't very big, but it was still a ship no less. I had two floors, one for cooking, the other for sleepin' and that's all I needed.

It's just me…and Tenor…

I looked up and saw an island in the distance. This was it, I was gonna git some really good treasure this time, I turned the wheel and the ship spun onto its side, and docked right next to the island…

"Tenor?"

Tenor turned to me and I bonked him on the head

"Yer an idiot!" I said looking around, this island wasn't big at all, there was just a palm tree…and someone out on the sand.

I walked over to whoever it was… "Idiot! Idiot!" Tenor said pecking at my head, I stopped and swatted him away.

I turned the Pokemon over and saw that it was a Buizel

Why do I have this feeling…that this wee' guy's gonna give me a LOT of trouble?

He started to open his eyes

"…Crap" I said.


That's it for the first chapter so far X3 Sorry if the cliffhanger makes you mad ^^; just trying to get into the hang of writing this, Koro's speech is…err kinda hard, but I hope you and I get used to saying and doing it…

See ya next time ^^