I'm doing this because I thought in BOTL the kiss wasn't described much. 3 words,"She kissed me" isn't the best way to describe one of the best Percabeth moments in the entire series. Both Percy will have a Altered and Original POV, Annabeth will have original only. (Don't say it's bad because you think I'm incorrect, it's something I wanted to do.)
Percy POV (Original)
Annabeth came closer to me and stared like she was going to punch me.
Our faces were only a few inches apart. I glanced down and saw her clenched fist. I braced myself.
Then her lips touched mine, I sucked in a breath through my nose.
She was pressing her soft lips to mine. I panicked, was I supposed to do something.
I guess I couldn't do anything just sit there and enjoy the last moment we had with each other and I closed my eyes.
I could hear the thumping of my heart; it sounded like an elephant herd was running through the… where was I?
She broke away, said "Be careful", and vanished before I could read her expression.
Wow, I hope I was a good kisser; I stared at the lava trying to remember my name.
Then I heard the sea demons, from romance to action, great.
Annabeth POV (Original)
Percy was going to go commit suicide and he wants me to lay back and watch him get slaughtered. I clenched my fists.
There is no way I'd let him, I started to speak up again but I saw his intense, serious, expression and knew I couldn't talk him out of it.
Butterflies started to form in my stomach, did he really care for me this much? Did he really like me as much as I liked him?
Let's see, I leaned forward and pressed my lips to his.
At first he was startled, his lips were soft and he tasted like salt. I loved it.
He probably didn't know what to do, neither do me.
I didn't move, I just kept my lips pressed to his.
When I moved away I was sure I was blushing a lot so I tried my best serious expression and vanished before he would notice my red face.
Once I was invisible I was able to smile and ran towards the exit.
I looked back at his face, he was really cute he slashed a sea demon and jumped toward the middle platform.
NO! He's going to kill himself! NO! NO! My best friend is trying to kill himself.
The older sea demons started throwing lava at him. I couldn't watch I got out and sat.
He can't die, he can't. Not after I kissed him, I put my head in my hands and started to cry a bit.
I have to go back. Just as I was about to open the door I heard an explosion.
The whole place rocked. What happened did the place erupt? "PERCY" I cried.
The whole door was starting to shake. Ashy water spilled from the sides of the hatch.
"No…" I whispered, I sat down and started to cry.
Third person (Altered)
Percy and Annabeth stared at each other.
Percy got up and walked to the side of the cauldron.
Annabeth grabbed his shoulder and made him look into her eyes.
Percy POV (Altered)
She made me look into her gray eyes.
"Don't kill you, Percy," she said.
"I won't, you need to save yourself, besides a got a prophecy protecting me" I said, though I didn't believe it.
She sighed, blowing her sweet breath into my face, "Percy a lot of people care about you; Poseidon, your mom, Grover, Tyson, Chiron, and most of all… me."
Her last few words shocked me. Our faces were 2 inches apart.
"At least let me fight with—"
"No" I said, "I have a plan, and it doesn't involve you possibly getting hurt".
"At least remember this for luck" she said.
She's not doing what I think she's doing.
She pressed her lips to mine making my heart thump out of my chest.
Whoa, my brain was going nuts trying to figure out if I'm dreaming.
Wow, if this is what love feels like let this never end but, it's just for luck, probably doesn't mean anything.
My heart fell on that thought, she was in love with Luke anyway.
She broke away and vanished.
It's over, my first and probably last kiss.
