Achilles

by Jane Briseis Smith

A poeom written from Briseis' POV Like a take from her diary. Se reveals her feelings for Achilles. Now like many of you I din't like him dying at the end. I wrote this on my Finnish lesson it's translated by a very good friend. Readreview ENJOY!

Hi everyone! I'm Jane.This is my first Troy fanfic. While reviewing... be nice but tell the truth

This is a poem written from Briseis' POV. I wrote the original version on my Finnish lesson and got it translated by a very good friend of mine.

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Achiles

Cold warrior

caring lover

a gift from gods to Greece

Beside him it's safe for me to wake up

I feel his strong arms embracing me,

gates of breathing are intertwined

Troy burns in flames

I'm looking for you

Achiles

where are you my love?

within the flames, I shall find you

In your arms I feel safe

like floating on a cloud

your words of tender echo inside of me

something strikes you

your pain is unbearable

everything else you can take,

but not this

not your heel

Move on, my love.

Thanks for reading! Hope you liked it. Leave me feedback please.

Jane Briseis Smith