**FIRST STORY ALERT**
I'd like to start this off by saying that this is my first fanfiction story, both on this site and ever... So I hope it goes over well :3 I got the Idea to even write one because I read one a while back called "Fate and Dominoes" on this site and it was very moving, beautifully written if I may add. Beside the point though, I have to practice writing over the summer for school anyway so I guess this counts :)
Please tell me of course any criticisms or issues there are with it, because I really would like to know if my story is any good!
(to clear up any confusion, if there are horizontal lines through the story it symbolizes the passage of time, also there will be one after any notes i have before the chapter begins)
CHARACTERS:
David "Lasercorn" Moss
Matt Sohinki (A.K.A Sohinki)
Joshua "The Jovenshire" Ovenshire
Wesley "Wes" Johnson
Mariko "Mari" Takahashi
Ian Hecox
Anthony Padilla
Amra "Flitz" Ricketts
Anyway, here goes nothing I suppose.
3rd Person POV
"Goddamit Sohinki, shut up about DOTA and help me kill these assholes!" Lasercorn and Sohinki were in the Smosh Games room late at night trying to finish off a few heists so they could get money for new gear. Without Joven of course, he would only screw things up.
"Hey, I'm just saying. It would be hard for even Joven to mess up a game like DOTA, though he is not worthy to even gaze upon it in all its glory." Sohinki replied dreamily, staring off into the screen though his mind was elsewhere.
"Hey Sohinki," Lasercorn said, sounding suddenly serious.
"Yeah?" Sohinki said, switching through the guns menu and selecting a sticky bomb.
"Stop going gay for fucking DOTA and kill these cops!" Lasercorn yelled, laughing a little at catching Sohinki off-guard with a jab at his favorite game.
"Yeesh, fine." Sohinki said, "Don't see why you gotta hate on DOTA like that bro."he muttered, simultaneously throwing a cascade of stickys into the nearby fray of cop cars and officers firing at Lasercorn who was hiding behind a wall at the gas station he had just robbed.
There was a gigantic explosion, maybe a few too many explosives were involved in this… Nevertheless, Sohinki's character was blown back and he threw his controller down when the screen went gray and "wasted" appeared before his eyes.
"Ha! I get all the money now!" Lasercorn shouted triumphantly.
"Well, I'm done," Sohinki said, done with trying to cooperate with Lasercorn. "see you tomorrow dude."
"Yea, bye. I'm gonna stay, I just need to finish off this last heist and I'll clean up and go home too" Lasercorn replied, his eyes fixed on the screen.
"K." Sohinki said as he placed his headset on his desk, turned off his monitor, and left closing the door behind him.
Sohinki had been gone for about half an hour when Lasercorn decided it was high-time to clean up and go home for the night.
He turned off the playstation and put his controller and headset back on his desk.
On his way out Lasercorn noticed that Wes's computer was still on, there were a few tabs open so he was probably still editing something and he just left it open so that he could pick up where he left off yesterday.
Though Lasercorn was a little curious about what Wes was working on so he went over to the desk and sat down. He gave the mouse a little wiggle to make the screensaver go away and he saw that Wes had been working on a new GTS episode.
Nothing out of the ordinary here, after all it was Wes's job anyway. Lasercon got a strange feeling as he got up and pushed Wes's chair back in, almost as if someone was watching him.
He looked around around the room.
Nothing.
But not much else was to be expected because Lasercorn was the last one in the Smosh Games office.
He proceeded to put on his coat and leave the office, locking the door behind him. But before he left he took one more quick peek into the room. "Thats kinda weird... It was almost like someone else was in there." He thought to himself as he walked out to his car.
Lasercorn felt a slightly uneasy feeling as he drove home that night.
Okay! That's my first chapter, i'm sorry that it wasn't very long i'm planning more for the next chapter. I'll release it sometime next week if I get good responses from what I have so far but for now I hope you all enjoy!
