The story starts out in 2015 Napoleon and Debb got married.
Napoleon- Debb come make me some tots
Debb- I got to go to my job Napoleon so you have to make them your self
Napoleon- you need a better job, that one flippin sucks! Gosh
Debb- I wanted to go to collage but you told me to that collage sucks
Napoleon- your mom goes to collage
Debb- good bye napoleon
Napoleon- bye Debb
Debb leaves and napoleon is all alone
Napoleon- I feel like a firkin slave I got to do everything around here!
opens the freezer and grabs some tots. The freezer is packed with just tots he puts the tots in the oven and turns it on. He picks up the phone and calls pedro
Pedro- hello
Napoleon- yea is pedro there?
Pedro- yes this is pedro.
Napoleon- Hi me and debb just had a flippin huge fight!
Pedro- about what?
Napoleon- collage
Pedro- oh
Napoleon- Yeah like im super upset right now so come over and like we will eat tots.
Pedro- free tots ok ill be right over
Napoleon- ok bye
Pedro- bye
So this is the first chapter what do you think please tell me so i can fix it this is my first story of all time so review and tell me the truth Gosh!